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tomocles
04-02-2009, 12:54 AM
definitely my best so far:

http://www.doubleframed.com/upload/view.php?id=1238657291city

I will be adding coloring and shading as well, soon.

Rabstar
04-02-2009, 01:10 AM
Amazing, as I already said. :D

tomocles
04-02-2009, 01:25 AM
thanks rabstar! I added a colored version, and anyone that wants the fla, just send me a pm.

-Hawk-
04-02-2009, 02:52 AM
That's really detailed and pretty well animated. I couldn't even draw that well lol Good job! ^_^

Foda
04-02-2009, 05:24 AM
i love it
details were great
the style was good too
i cant see anything wrong with it

Tawnik
04-02-2009, 12:01 PM
Wow, it was really good, drawings are awesome :D BUT to the animation
Easing was just fine
Timing and spacing were alright
Imo you just have to add more inbetweens to make it more smooth, because the only thing that ruins the feeling of great animation is the smoothness :)

Keep up the good work =)

doc
04-02-2009, 12:40 PM
great person, but like tawnik said, more in between frames.

tomocles
04-02-2009, 01:29 PM
I fixed it up some more:

http://www.doubleframed.com/upload/view.php?id=1238700928run

Tawnik
04-02-2009, 01:36 PM
Looks better, maybe I didnt point out how good the whole thing is, :D, its really pwnsome, because of the drawings and the easing is quite fine too, I really like it, Im just letting you know how good thing you made =)

Add even more frames, focus on the back leg it kind of look like its staying back, its really fast no, try to add more frames, dont be lazy and finish it, it'll be great.

But, if you are going to act my advice, dont forget to ease !! :D Dont ruin it, :D



..oh man, I have to learn literature for tomorrow's test :(

tomocles
04-02-2009, 01:49 PM
I will add more frames, but I am a bit confused why you repeated what you liked about it...

Tawnik
04-02-2009, 01:53 PM
I will add more frames, but I am a bit confused why you repeated what you liked about it...

You dont have to be confused, its just Tawnik, he wants to let you know how good your animation is and how good it CAN be if you add more frames.
A lot of newbies just come here and tell you "wow thats good" "omg, you are the best" etc. and It happens really often that I open some topic with these replies and after watching the animation I'm like "nothing special," so, I just want you to know that its good.I shouldnt be that nice =(

Chimaera
04-02-2009, 02:00 PM
It's either way more frames or a slower FPS, at the moment it looks like he's hopping on the front leg, seriously, focus on the back leg and it becomes really apparent.

Also, a bit more animation for the arms, they just zip from one place to the next.


Good detail though.

kinto
04-02-2009, 03:05 PM
Not very smooth but also yo you need to wag his cock around a little more.

Lemon
04-02-2009, 03:06 PM
Looks a little choppy. But its well drawn and well animated.

Sunder Forge
04-02-2009, 03:08 PM
Do you have a tablet?

tomocles
04-02-2009, 03:11 PM
um, yeah. If you dont, you should get one. :)

Sunder Forge
04-02-2009, 03:13 PM
um, yeah. If you dont, you should get one. :)
Hopefully soon D:
Anim was coo bro.

Shanto
04-02-2009, 03:19 PM
lol hes naked rofl

No but seriously great animation bro.

tomocles
04-02-2009, 03:25 PM
shanto, be lucky he isnt dr. manhattan. We all know what that would look like. o.o

Thanks you guys! going to be doing a collaborated animation with goukakyou and two of his friends in this style, so look out for it in like a month!