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Kieran.
04-03-2009, 12:02 PM
I haven't animated for 3 weeks,(other than the running into walls collab) I started animating 4 weeks ago...

I have been looking at many tutorials and reading other peoples C&C...

and It looks like i've improved..

these were my last animations: http://www.truploader.com/view/870410

this is the one I did today..: http://www.truploader.com/view/708607

(took me 45 mins, 24fps)

I know Its too short for C&C really, but I just wanted to start back at animating with a short one... If you have any to off it would be appreciated.

MaxZ
04-03-2009, 12:06 PM
Ugly blood, wobbly, choppy, stiff. Work on everything. Just practice.

N T
04-03-2009, 12:17 PM
i liked the second one.

FoShizzle
04-03-2009, 12:17 PM
What Maxipads said.

doc
04-03-2009, 12:39 PM
i think your stuff looks way better with the line tool. And you don't need to redraw EVERY frame, it makes it look really wobbly. And you might want to bend the backs a bit more.
Also, when the guy drops, he barely moves. He fell from a big height, he should bend a lot more.
Otherwise, you are definitely getting a lot better.

Kieran.
04-03-2009, 12:59 PM
Ugly blood, wobbly, choppy, stiff. Work on everything. Just practice.

yeh, I definitely need practice...


i liked the second one.

They were my old ones !!!! don't use them!!!


What Maxipads said.

exactly


i think your stuff looks way better with the line tool. And you don't need to redraw EVERY frame, it makes it look really wobbly. And you might want to bend the backs a bit more.
Also, when the guy drops, he barely moves. He fell from a big height, he should bend a lot more.
Otherwise, you are definitely getting a lot better.

I will try to bend the backs more.. and not redraw every frame...
(I havent used the line tool before???)
thanks for Critics!

N T
04-03-2009, 01:20 PM
They were my old ones !!!! don't use them!!!

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