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alcaknight
04-03-2009, 08:37 PM
Im working on making getting my animations smoother. How about this one? I will probably make this one longer.

Sorry for the shortness.
http://www.truploader.com/view/477677

alcaknight
04-03-2009, 08:52 PM
Here is an update. I want to convey more emotions. Does it do it?

http://www.truploader.com/view/629231

allyman8
04-03-2009, 10:49 PM
I like the one in the second post, made him look scared ;D, keep it up.

N T
04-04-2009, 01:32 AM
it was kinda bumpy but it waz cool. try a longer fight with lots of emotions...

Avian
04-04-2009, 01:42 AM
Well, at the start it was a bit smooth, but then it became a bit choppy. And the it was smooth again.

doc
04-04-2009, 05:42 AM
i thought the whole thing was really smooth, good job on it. And you really showed the guys fear well in the second one. But the sticks were a little too fat in my opinion, but that might just be a personal preference.

alcaknight
04-04-2009, 07:59 AM
i thought the whole thing was really smooth, good job on it. And you really showed the guys fear well in the second one. But the sticks were a little too fat in my opinion, but that might just be a personal preference.

Hey, thanks! I still havent gotten over the fat sticks yet. I am still having troubles making the sticks longer, because they look awkward.


Well, at the start it was a bit smooth, but then it became a bit choppy. And the it was smooth again.

Hey, thanks. I will try and make it more smooth in the middle.


I like the one in the second post, made him look scared ;D, keep it up.

:Happy:


it was kinda bumpy but it waz cool. try a longer fight with lots of emotions...

I will try, and thanks!

alcaknight
04-04-2009, 12:49 PM
I think that I may have failed....
http://www.truploader.com/view/658641

What do you guys think?

MaxZ
04-04-2009, 12:54 PM
It wasn't really smooth.

1lasthero
04-04-2009, 04:17 PM
It is smooth, kind of choppy in the middle but smooth. Good Work. :heh:

But in your 3rd animation, i couldnt really tell what was going on, try making your sticks look thinner.