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N T
04-06-2009, 06:11 AM
old:
http://www.truploader.com/view/738984
http://www.truploader.com/view/831624
new:
http://www.truploader.com/view/986406 (test)

leave tips and coments. ty =)

Vincent
04-06-2009, 06:30 AM
The two old ones:
Top one-
Wasn't bad, just it looked like the blue guy had a boner. The effects (his teleporting) kinda sucked, work on that. Also work on your blood, Zoom in and use a smaller brush. Then shade it in a little with a darker shade of red.

Bottom one-
That walking was horrible. He looked like he skipped, flew 2 ft forward, then some how tripped on the rock from 5 ft away. Also blood work on get.

New one:
Add a little more easing towards the end, nice force though.

N T
04-06-2009, 09:43 AM
thx for the tips. i just learned how to add sound today so.. my sounds r a little off.

Saha
04-06-2009, 10:05 AM
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/1992/wtfj.gif
Are you serious?

allyman8
04-06-2009, 11:20 AM
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/1992/wtfj.gif
Are you serious?


Obviously, when he drew the leg, it went up too far, thus creating a penis looking thing.
First and Last we're ok, the second one looked odd, and uneased.

doc
04-06-2009, 12:19 PM
i liked the third one, the running in the first was really off, and... Well, I can't really tell what was off in the second one. Maybe it was just the movements?
Keep going, though, you're definitely improving.