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Ftball1997
04-10-2009, 07:06 PM
this is pretty much the first time i made an animation witthe line tool.
plz comment
the link is............
(http://img214.imageshack.us/my.php?image=walke.gif)
or
[IMG]http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4562/walke.th.gif (http://img214.imageshack.us/my.php?image=walke.gif)

Foda
04-10-2009, 07:13 PM
it was wobbly and do not use imageshack.

Sunder Forge
04-10-2009, 07:14 PM
Pretty good, but it seems robotic and unnatural, try to move his arms a little, in the same pattern as his feet (You know what i mean)
Also, he's kinda wobbly, but that'll fix over time, oh and the pause after every step is too long, take out a few frames inbetween.

Ftball1997
04-11-2009, 05:23 AM
thx i will edit it
and repost

EDIT 8:33
my frame rate was 12 so that could be one of the reasons itsucks

Scarecrow
04-11-2009, 05:54 AM
for the record, no matter what anyone says, more exclamation marks do NOT make your thread more attractive

doc
04-11-2009, 06:14 PM
Maybe up the framerate a bit, or make it smoother. I could see the difference between frames. And move the arms, and what they all said.