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Saha
04-11-2009, 04:28 AM
http://www.truploader.com/view/486437

or

http://filebox.me/view/979169

Tribute to Ssj and M3D.

and!

http://www.truploader.com/view/428224

or

http://filebox.me/view/22967

Practice on particles :3

CC Please <3

Tawnik
04-11-2009, 04:42 AM
You sir, you are going to be one of the best animators here =), the first animation is really good, but, I always say but :D
Well the red one is just fine, the black guys arent :( shame on you, those reactions needs some more work =) dont worry, just focus on it :)
+ lol at the blood style

the second one wasnt that good, it was too fast..slow it down and its fine =)


btw, Im overusing "=)"

Arch-Angel
04-11-2009, 04:45 AM
I thought they were very bad =/

Tawnik
04-11-2009, 04:51 AM
I thought they were very bad =/

That's not a critism, if you think they were bad, point out whats wrong, easing, spacing, timing, anticipation..

Saha
04-11-2009, 04:55 AM
Thanks tawnik and.. Damocles >.>

Appreciate the criticism ALOT tawnik :D

Rabstar
04-11-2009, 05:02 AM
Seemed quite lazy style, so much double framing, makes it loook SOOOOOOO STIFFF!
It looked nothing like ssjb's style, a bit like m3D's.
Good strength, though.
The moves on second were a bit too fast.
The particles seemed to go away a bit too fast, other than that, it was alright.
(:

Ssjbryando
04-11-2009, 05:24 AM
Yea I don't really think that's my style =P

Looks more like the other styles (>_>)

but its nice. Although you could have zoomed out a bit, that will make it look better. Some reactions were also kinda jerky, could be smoother.

The second one was the same. Had resizing, to jerky movements. Ease it more, or add imbetweens. Maybe even double frame some parts.

It looked like he was doing some weird flips.

THe particles \: hmm.. Idk lol. They loook kinda basic, dissolve very fast.


But overall nice nice =] continue.

(But my style is just me animating, and automatically because I have my own mind set, my style is created.. So its gonna be harder to mimic. Although I guess its just slow-ish/medium, smooth, concentrated forcefull moves lol. While some just take example of other styles =D)

Thank you for tha tribute =]

Saha
04-11-2009, 05:27 AM
Your most pleasurable welcome =]

I said "your style" meaning by a move of yours. The spinning kick.

I used it some what the way you do, so, yeah.

Ssjbryando
04-11-2009, 05:28 AM
>:\ I see. lol. Although I still don't see it lol :O

D:

Well, cool. : D Don't get into the habit of fbfing moves though.

Raffi
04-11-2009, 05:45 AM
It was horribly choppy and WAY too fast. And too big too. Zoom out slightly next time.

Lixu
04-11-2009, 06:02 AM
1st one: Zoom out, make the reactions less dramatic so it's easier to do combo's.

Both: Where is M3D or Ssj? I don't see it.

N T
04-11-2009, 06:26 AM
=) :D :( =) :) =)

btw, Im overusing "=)"

=/

>.> :D
(:

=P (>_>) \: =] =D =]

=]

>:\ :O D: : D
uhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh... nice animations.. especially like the blood explosion effect thingy mobobs.

Saha
04-11-2009, 06:41 AM
It was horribly choppy and WAY too fast. And too big too. Zoom out slightly next time.

Uhh, are you sure about this because, the first time I saw my animation in the link it was lagging..

You have to see it twice.

N T
04-11-2009, 06:49 AM
That wasn't blood explosion.. wutever it was

Uhh, are you sure about this because, the first time I saw my animation in the link it was lagging..

You have to see it twice.
yeah... the first time i saw it it was really wierd.. it looked like the guy was doing a little jig.. no idea why.

doc
04-11-2009, 06:12 PM
The first one had really good movements, and great force. The second one was a bit too fast, I couldn't really tell what was happening.

Miccool
04-11-2009, 07:25 PM
it's not bad... the guy in the second is really spastic. lol. I like the particles in the second one.

Saha
04-11-2009, 07:43 PM
Thanks guys :D

Hey, Miccool, :D Yeah, it was spazzy.

I really appreciate all these comments, guys :D

kinto
04-11-2009, 08:33 PM
It was alright but I don't like the messy drawn stick style. Its okay though for the style.

Saha
04-11-2009, 08:37 PM
It also makes great music :3

I might make one today.

Flood
04-12-2009, 01:07 PM
It was horribly choppy and WAY too fast. And too big too. Zoom out slightly next time.

This + wobbly.

Other than that, good job.

Ftball1997
04-12-2009, 02:34 PM
Uh i dont like the second one for the reason that the character waz spazzy but the particles were good
the first one i like but ididnt like how after he jumped up and kicked when he landed he was in the air.