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Sawc
04-12-2009, 07:11 PM
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/491210

Pretty short, but it's the first flash animation I have ever finished. I'm pleased.

kinto
04-12-2009, 07:12 PM
Lol I liked it. It was also pretty funny.

Mr.Pancake
04-12-2009, 07:15 PM
seems unfinished

Sawc
04-12-2009, 07:16 PM
How so? Well the end AS is a bit messed up so the music doesn't stop, but other than that it's the most finished I had planned it to be.

kinto
04-12-2009, 07:22 PM
I agree, I was expecting him to get shot or like go look for eggs or see someone steal his eggs. Like more of what he explained.

Sawc
04-12-2009, 07:53 PM
Well I might continue with the concept later and add more to it, but for this particular one it was just somewhat of a quick happy easter ecard type.

N T
04-12-2009, 09:20 PM
lol.. funny. how long did it take you to animate it?

Rabstar
04-12-2009, 11:44 PM
Sawc, you back? Haven't seen you in a LONNG time.
<3 the name wigglyness thing.
The drawing was quite good. Not much to say about animation.
Really good for a first, try adding colour. :D

joaoba16
04-13-2009, 06:26 AM
Well its short, but looks ok.
Did you motion tween something or just fbf? Or both?

Mr.Pancake
04-13-2009, 07:02 AM
The art just seemed a bit conceptual, thick lines are bad, use as much detail as you can, also a coloured or atleast shaded version would be more likeley to be a finished version other then this one.

Bonk
04-13-2009, 07:40 AM
Cute, but it seemed unfinished as said. It wasn't the black and white necessarily - some of the lines just looked too sketchy.

Sawc
04-13-2009, 04:42 PM
I'll have to work on my artistic abilities. And this was all fbf, I prefer it over tweening unless I only need basic movement.

doc
04-13-2009, 08:39 PM
It was good, I liked it. But I didn't hear any music :( I heard the gunshot though. Oh well. Looked great to me.