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Badass
03-24-2008, 12:17 PM
Hi, im new here, as you can see ^^

Well, i have made a little flash before, but haven't ever posted it on forums.

So here ya go.

www. swfup.com/file/165658


Edit: w ww.swfup.com/file/165711

Tolin
03-24-2008, 12:38 PM
www.swfup.com/file/165658

Well, good for a beginner!
I don't think the kick looked right, and when he fell through the wall, it looked a little choppy-like. I think you should remove the last stick frame, that will look better.
I like your style, keep it up!

Shanto
03-24-2008, 12:41 PM
No wai that is your first anim! Way to go man! I like that style.

Badass
03-24-2008, 01:13 PM
Aight.

Tolin: Thanks for the advice, i'll will do that :D

Shanto: Yeah, it is one of ma first anims :D

Tolin
03-24-2008, 01:13 PM
No wai that is your first anim! Way to go man! I like that style.


Well, i have made a little flash before, but haven't ever posted it on forums.

Clears out the confusion

Badass
03-24-2008, 01:20 PM
Yeah ^^

Tentionmaru
03-24-2008, 02:00 PM
not bad, not bad.

Etch
03-24-2008, 02:19 PM
Jump needs to be higher and more easing when he is at max height, then he comes down hard. Not bad, just higher jump when you have that much anticipation.

Badass
03-25-2008, 09:25 AM
Thx guys :D

I will use every advice i can get.