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Ragnarus
04-19-2009, 12:53 AM
http://i055.radikal.ru/0902/61/d468f8491184.gif

=)

Ragnarus
04-19-2009, 12:57 AM
"Время умереть" this is on Russian. Its translate "Time to Die".

Ragnarus
04-19-2009, 01:07 AM
The line from the cursor, and an inscription on it. Translation: "revitalize"

Two ending texts translate like: "This cartoon describes all of my bad experience with other creatures" and "The end"

Avian
04-19-2009, 04:04 AM
Please don't triple post. You've gotta improve the movements.

MaxZ
04-19-2009, 04:20 AM
I guess you gotta go to the beginners section.

Sorry, mate :]

Avian
04-19-2009, 04:27 AM
You're happy (this sign :]) that there is another noob ? How nice.

zawmbee
04-19-2009, 04:30 AM
He's being polite you dumb ****.

Avian
04-19-2009, 04:31 AM
I realized that.

Vacuum
04-19-2009, 04:33 AM
I realized that.


It didn't look like it.





As for you, thread poster, the animation was pretty good for your first. Though you should post in the pivot beginners thread until you get better.







Finally, a noob that's nice.

Ustartin
04-19-2009, 04:52 AM
Very good for a first animation. I don't think you'll need to go to the Beginners' Section as you seem like a natural, although you should have posted there first. We get a lot worse which isn't on the Beginners' Section. For future animations, please take them to the Beginners' Section, but this one will suffice here.

You need to work mainly on physics and smoothing. You can make that animation smoother byu inserting more frames and you can put in "easing" - that's when you end a movement gradually getting slower, instead of stopping quickly.

The physics are hard in an almost ragdoll animation like that, you need to get the basics first. Look at the pose the Stickman is in when he's standing still, or lying, or any still position and think to yourself, "is this natural/realistic?"

There are some great tutorials here, go look at them for basic movements such as walking/running/jumping etc.

Welcome to SPP and post in the Beginners' Section in future, please!

jpivotmaker
04-19-2009, 05:37 AM
I'm in the beginners section and i'm a lot better than this >_>

MaxZ
04-19-2009, 05:40 AM
And he should be in the beginners too. But he's polite so we'll be nice too.

Vacuum
04-19-2009, 05:44 AM
I'm in the beginners section and i'm a lot better than this >_>


Bighead.
















Seriously, I hate people like that. They just come and go like "omgeez wtf im betur and im in teh begunurz sactjun tew olol snot fare".








Grrrr.

Lemon
04-19-2009, 05:53 AM
Its not as bad as I expected, but it sure wasn't good. Begginers please.

N T
04-19-2009, 05:57 AM
i doubt that was your first animation but pretty cool.. the objects were nicely done.

zawmbee
04-19-2009, 06:06 AM
I'm in the beginners section and i'm a lot better than this >_>
Wow, he's low, and you're high, OK?
STILL BEGINNER.

jpivotmaker
04-19-2009, 11:01 AM
W/e
Stfu i'm just stating my opinion.
and i'm not saying "omgeez wtf im betur and im in teh begunurz sactjun tew olol snot fare".

Stickpage is a ****ing mess.
Imma' gtfo k.

MaxZ
04-19-2009, 11:02 AM
Yes, you better GTFO :]

jpivotmaker
04-19-2009, 11:04 AM
Ok gladly :)
bye.

zawmbee
04-19-2009, 11:13 AM
Yet you are still here.

Vacuum
04-19-2009, 12:50 PM
Ok gladly :)
bye.


Come on now, shoo.




Not like anybody needs you here, you ****ing bighead.

You're all going around "ooooh look at me, im so kul wid mai badass skillz ooooh"





It makes me wanna throw up.

Ustartin
04-19-2009, 01:35 PM
Come on now, shoo.




Not like anybody needs you here, you ****ing bighead.

You're all going around "ooooh look at me, im so kul wid mai badass skillz ooooh"





It makes me wanna throw up.

You're the one acting like the Pivot King, douchebag.

Telling people to GTFO the Pivot section. Do it yourself, loser. These people ask for help and a bit of C&C and you just tell them how they're big losers or whatever.

I have no respect for you, by the way.

Flesh
04-19-2009, 01:38 PM
Both of you can shut the **** up and get the **** out of this section if you are going to continue like this, ****ing disgrace the both of you. Take this to PM's and get out of this pile of shit thread right the hell now

Ustartin
04-19-2009, 01:40 PM
Both of you can shut the **** up and get the **** out of this section if you are going to continue like this, ****ing disgrace the both of you. Take this to PM's and get out of this pile of shit thread right the hell now

You talking to me?

Flesh
04-19-2009, 01:45 PM
I'm talking to both of you raging flaming faggots, leave this thread and continue your argument by PM

Ustartin
04-19-2009, 01:47 PM
I'm talking to both of you raging flaming faggots, leave this thread and continue your argument by PM

That was my one post, telling him what he's doing to this newb.

You're one to talk about "raging flaming faggots".

Flesh
04-19-2009, 01:48 PM
Hey at least I admit I am a raging flaming faggot, I'm sorry if I thought this was a fully fledged argument I came on and saw this -

You're the one acting like the Pivot King, douchebag.

Telling people to GTFO the Pivot section. Do it yourself, loser. These people ask for help and a bit of C&C and you just tell them how they're big losers or whatever.

I have no respect for you, by the way.







And I raged vehemently at all of this faggotry so I told you both to get the **** out and take it to personal messaging

Kieran.
04-20-2009, 03:32 AM
Oh come on... He's not that bad. He's a lot better than some of the people than don't post in the beginners section!

TheCreator
04-21-2009, 05:00 PM
Nice job, but for first anims, there is a point to the Beginners Section, please post in there, once people in there say you are ready, move out here.

Cronos
04-23-2009, 07:56 PM
yeah are you trying for a "just like animator vs animation" cos ull wont to improve your movements first.

playstickrpg
04-24-2009, 06:25 PM
pretty good for a beginner!!! mine suckkkkk.............

BOB

Ragnarus
04-25-2009, 08:20 AM
So ... I'm going to newbies? Oops! This is my first animation. I'll show the second, third, fifth, tenth cartoons, and they will be a hundred times better than this.

sticksith
04-25-2009, 08:39 AM
Wow, is that really your 1st animation? It's like, 1000 times better than mine!

Ragnarus
04-25-2009, 08:43 AM
Thanx, I tried)

edwin711
06-03-2009, 04:58 PM
to me u did good hey im a biggener to but that was good im a good maker of pivot but i dont think im that good in phiscy lol

edwin711
06-03-2009, 05:01 PM
6437 see these all suck ur more better by the way these are my first my other is more better then these

captainaction
06-03-2009, 05:36 PM
I liked your animation, and now I am eager to see more from you. I'm also fascinated by other languages so the Russian was cool.

Zed
06-04-2009, 02:12 AM
Do not bump old threads. Please leave this to die.

mvfcrule
06-06-2009, 02:53 AM
that is not your first anim

Avian
06-06-2009, 03:37 AM
Bumpin'.
Don't.

rozzer
06-06-2009, 05:21 AM
LOL edwin "i am also a good pivot maker" dont lie its bad =p anyway ragnarus it was good but i'm with mvfcrule on this one, that wasent ur first animation

1explode1
06-06-2009, 07:58 PM
Some people are really good, at this, believe me. This could be first anim. He is better than me, but not by that much really.

mvfcrule
06-07-2009, 01:57 AM
yeah,
I guess it could be his first, he might have watched alot of people make pivot anims and picked up some experience there.

Avian
06-07-2009, 03:45 AM
This thread is really old.
Don't bump.

Conker303
06-10-2009, 04:12 PM
It gets kinda choppy towards the end.

teh aninminator
06-13-2009, 10:36 AM
ragnarus- that was incredible for a beginner, especially ragdoll physics, but you need to work on easing and realism. u also moved the mouse way too much every frame and it got kind of choppy at the end. no way that was your very first, lol

Rival
06-13-2009, 11:04 AM
STOP BUMPING THIS THREAD!!!

please!

teh aninminator
06-13-2009, 12:35 PM
you have to get last post, didn't you? i just wanted to give him some advice and get closer to 15 posts so i can post my own anims. sorry! (*sob*)