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flip
04-21-2009, 06:00 AM
http://www.truploader.com/view/393523

^ this is my unfinished animation.

c&c pls

RawGreen
04-21-2009, 06:17 AM
minor resizing.
The fighting is sorta crappy, effects are nice.
he moves too fast, he needs some anticipation and easing.

Kieran.
04-21-2009, 06:23 AM
Agreeing with rawgreen. The beam was awesome.

The punches etc lacked force and build up, but I guess your doing a frame to frame style. Just needs more force then. And follow through.

N T
04-21-2009, 06:40 AM
that was sweet :) expected it to be longer though...

RawGreen
04-21-2009, 07:26 AM
that was sweet :) expected it to be longer though...

as he said, unfinished. There's the chance of him finishing it.

EDIT: though that's up to him

doc
04-21-2009, 01:02 PM
Hey, I'm glad you've decided to post here, I've seen your stuff on the portal often.
Anyway, you might want to add some more in between frames. He just kinda goes from one move to the next. Also, when he does a certain move (Ex. holding the whip) his whole body should be moving, not just one small part (his arm).

Tawnik
04-21-2009, 01:05 PM
Bubbleman V2 :)
I knew that guy, he was my friend, he had the best effects ever made in 2d, his movements werent that good (compared to the rest of the guys here he the movements were damn awesome, but compared to the effects, it was nothing)
Mr. Flip, animate, animate and animate, you'll get better, better and better =D

flip
04-23-2009, 03:15 PM
Thanks guys. lotta help,

also::

the movements are a little choppy because i'm new to skewing instead of framing. (new to this style)
the reason its a little slow is becuase it used 2 be 24 fps, and then i switched to 20, bcus stone told me 2. and i alredy took out the useless frames from it.
and i think that i made the second whip lash bad, but the first one was good, i might go back and change it,
and YES i WILL finish it. i havnt stopped working on it at all. so you can count on it to be done eventually, and submitted to the portal.

shayphis
04-25-2009, 03:37 PM
Finish it, I liked it.

TheCreator
04-25-2009, 08:38 PM
Your story is a little screwed up, if he had those powers, he never would have been captured.

Omega
04-25-2009, 08:54 PM
Your story is a little screwed up, if he had those powers, he never would have been captured.

. . .

Schwa
04-25-2009, 10:20 PM
He seems to pause in awkward poses :/

Also.

Plain Shifter.

Is.

Stupid.

TheCreator
04-25-2009, 10:35 PM
And.
Schwa.
Sucks.
His.
Mom's.
Dick.

flip
04-26-2009, 11:57 AM
lol guys stop fighting, paperclip will ban you both. but...
thanks for the comments