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rassengan
04-23-2009, 10:35 AM
Hey Um :Bricked: Im new to stickpage and i just wanted to post my first stick animation, I know its pretty awful - Ok, very awful. - and i was wondering if anyone could give some tips on how i could improve. Its not really finished yet, I need to add the victim of that kickish stunt at the end and then probably more after

truploader.com/view/620432
truploader.com/view/165299 (Update)

Oh and yes, my name comes from Naruto :D

MaxZ
04-23-2009, 10:45 AM
Hm, was good. I'll CC more later.

Kieran.
04-23-2009, 10:50 AM
http://truploader.com/view/620432

Well I have serious doubts that is your first animation, but meh.

It was quite good, but lacked force. Also the blood needs work on.

rassengan
04-23-2009, 10:51 AM
Zyles: Sure thing! :)
KD: His attacks lack force? Or the umm reactions?

joaoba16
04-23-2009, 11:09 AM
Its really your first stick animation??

rassengan
04-23-2009, 11:14 AM
Thats right .

Potato Guy
04-23-2009, 11:16 AM
Bullshit .

rassengan
04-23-2009, 11:25 AM
This IS my first STICK animation

Avian
04-23-2009, 11:29 AM
Anyways, this doesn't seems to be a real rasengan.

rassengan
04-23-2009, 11:30 AM
Its not real its an animation O.o

rassengan
04-23-2009, 11:32 AM
truploader.com/view/165299

Heres an update, i just liked the way the kick turned out.

And i apologise, I looked at many tutorials from the tutorials section.. Apparently its good to use 22fps, I have messed around just looking at the various functions in flash, but now, my World of Warcraft is fully updated, and im going to play!

(European version add Rassengan :P im on the realm Mazrigos!)

Kieran.
04-23-2009, 11:49 AM
Updated version: http://truploader.com/view/165299

Yea, If It is your first animation, It's pretty god damn good. And by force I mean, better reactions, more easing, more enticipation and a bigger follow-through.

MaxZ
04-23-2009, 11:55 AM
Lol, you've done Fullbody before, huh?

The blood just teleported to the walls, make some more frames inbetween. Needs more anticipation, make them charge up for the attack, you'll have to lean back before you can give a good punch, improve that. The gun wasn't really pretty but that doesn't really matter. The physics were off a little too. I like the style, needs a tad more easing but it'll be fine.

There :]

doc
04-23-2009, 01:11 PM
I don't doubt its a first. You were too lazy to animate more than one enemy at a time.
But its pretty good, everything else has already been said.

rassengan
04-23-2009, 01:15 PM
Hmm thats a good point, the others should be keeping watch, maybe reading newspapers, talking, everything that normal people do!

olololno
04-23-2009, 01:51 PM
Wasn't your first animation. Not sure about stick figures or not.
It wasn't that good =/ Work on movements, add more frames, etc.

flip
04-23-2009, 03:28 PM
erm the movements was choppy

austinach
04-23-2009, 03:29 PM
hi evryone hi hi hi

rassengan
04-23-2009, 03:32 PM
Ok, I may make more of a fight scene out of this.

band_it
04-23-2009, 08:39 PM
This IS my first STICK animation

so how long have u been animating?
anyway, the attack need more force, the reaction could be better too, and TBH I hate that style :P

and u need to practice on physics there's something wrong in the anim that I couldn't tell u(I don't now what is it..)

anyway, it's nice for first STICK anim XD

godmouth
04-23-2009, 11:13 PM
Anyway, you said it's your first stick anim. If you never animated anything else, in either pivot or easytoon or something, and never did fullbody, then it's extremely good for your first. However, it seems unlikely that anyone would be able to animate sticks the first time and do that good.

But because you said the first STICK anim, I would assume you do fullbody as well.

shayphis
04-25-2009, 03:36 PM
Nice work, good job.