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scross
04-24-2009, 08:53 AM
first one:
h ttp://www.youtube.co m/watch?v=VNhIrswdivQ&feature=channel
second one:
h ttp://www.youtube.co m/watch?v=hVCoIFSsPZY&feature=channel
third one:
h ttp://www.youtube.co m/watch?v=Qc53OX7xMr8&feature=channel


please comment and advice..

PS: i know that youtube is not apropriate for flash animations(sound is not sync good with the vid), but it is just my start...thank you!!

poppetje3D
04-24-2009, 09:42 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VNhIrswdivQ&feature=channel

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hVCoIFSsPZY&feature=channel

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qc53OX7xMr8&feature=channel

Kieran.
04-24-2009, 10:29 AM
I'd say these are not your first ones, and If they were, they are incredibly good for your firsts.

1.) You needs more follow-through, better easing and some more anticipation. Furthermore you need to link your moves together smoother.

2.) There was quite a lot of reziseing here. Furthermore the effects were not good. It looks as though too many frames were used per period of smoke and it just looked jumpy.

3.) Same with the effects. When he shoots the gun, he should have more backforce applied to him. I suggest you start to use a higher frame-rate now, such as 24fps.

GOOD WORK! (keep it up)

doc
04-24-2009, 12:38 PM
I can tell that you used a really low framerate, like 12 maybe? You might want to up that to about 18 or so to start with.
Work on basic movements, and don't use tweens for movements, like that jump off of the wall. It just makes it look artificial.
But keep tryin, its good that you have the patience to do a 17 sec animation.

shayphis
04-25-2009, 03:34 PM
Nice, they brought back memories.