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Mesmay
04-29-2009, 02:20 PM
um yeah.

http://filebox.me/view/pbyvddy8h

unfinished

http://filebox.me/view/vfirtehxb

unfinished



gunna finish both

kthx

Sunder Forge
04-29-2009, 02:23 PM
Awsome shit, like the style.

Rape is cool bro.

Mesmay
04-29-2009, 02:29 PM
insult me


im not used to this lack of crit

Arch-Angel
04-29-2009, 02:32 PM
This is <3

Mesmay
04-29-2009, 02:33 PM
thanks <3

more comments?

also, whats the difference between a black man and a bench?

a bench can support a family of four.

Sunder Forge
04-29-2009, 02:39 PM
insult me


im not used to this lack of crit
Fine Second one:

Volco enlarged wobbly, and it looked awful.
The flurry of hits was too fast, and it takes a bit of time and re-watching to get them fully, and it was more of a beat down. The shock wave thing he made when he threw the blue blade seemed pointless, as it was barely noticed, and they look better with numbers, and when the result is stronger then you portrayed it as.

First:

The camera pan was too slow, and boring to watch, so I usually minimized it, if you're gonna do long pans, make awsome art. Art was nice, not great, but nice. Text was hard to read.

That was rather hard.

doc
04-29-2009, 02:53 PM
Wow that was harsh:D
I liked the second one, The first one was OK, but I'm just not too fond of that art style. I know other ppl are, so keep going with it if you like it.

Mesmay
04-29-2009, 03:11 PM
Fine Second one:

Volco enlarged wobbly, and it looked awful.
The flurry of hits was too fast, and it takes a bit of time and re-watching to get them fully, and it was more of a beat down. The shock wave thing he made when he threw the blue blade seemed pointless, as it was barely noticed, and they look better with numbers, and when the result is stronger then you portrayed it as.

First:

The camera pan was too slow, and boring to watch, so I usually minimized it, if you're gonna do long pans, make awsome art. Art was nice, not great, but nice. Text was hard to read.

That was rather hard.


thank you very much

i love you too

BluGil
04-29-2009, 03:31 PM
Awsome shit, like the style.

Rape is cool bro.

I would like some day for your closest female acquaintance to be raped.

Vacuum
04-29-2009, 10:35 PM
Yay.



Thanks for inspiring.

Endo-K
04-30-2009, 01:46 AM
You know i love it mes :3

Kensei
04-30-2009, 02:15 AM
Nice mesmay , I kinda agree the art style of the first one could be improved, just the Tv and bed and cars looked kinda bad. But I loved the faces and emotions.

Stick anim was really smooth and nice loved it :D

Blot
04-30-2009, 02:30 AM
i have to sasy 1 thing .......................... WOW

the first one was great with it distinctively in black and white, except for the red for the blood which is an emphasis on the violence of ur animation

the second 1 was teh pwnt

Miccool
04-30-2009, 03:26 AM
Have the girl kick his ass!.. The art style is interesting imo. Hard to differentiate things though.

I like it.

RawGreen
04-30-2009, 09:45 AM
the first one REALLY suggested rape man, you gotta do something about that.

Animation was still good, don't get me wrong.

camerawastoslowinthefirstone
lolz

Mesmay
04-30-2009, 10:45 AM
tee hee