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RawGreen
05-01-2009, 08:27 AM
This is one of the backgrounds I was going to use for the tltft round3
as you can see, I am posting this because I failed to get it done. as of right now the file is a bunch of backgrounds that were tweened but never fixed with proper effects and animation inside the clips.

I'll use this as a sample...and this is also only what you'd get from clicking on this thread:

http://www.truploader.com/view/345507

Any C&C is most appreciated.

Plague
05-01-2009, 09:12 AM
Smoke:
The smoke is good at first, but then it starts moving really weird, and the motion is distorted.

Sun:
Try to get rid of the blue ring around the sun, it's not a big deal, but yellow would look better.
Also, the gradient kindof chops, did you mean for it to be like this?

Rest of it:
It was great, but get rid of the shadow on the sky.
The small craters in the ground lacked edge details.

BluGil
05-01-2009, 10:43 AM
It looks too bubble, i think. Get it a little sharper. It looks like theres no space.

RawGreen
05-01-2009, 11:07 AM
Smoke:
The smoke is good at first, but then it starts moving really weird, and the motion is distorted.

Sun:
Try to get rid of the blue ring around the sun, it's not a big deal, but yellow would look better.
Also, the gradient kindof chops, did you mean for it to be like this?

Rest of it:
It was great, but get rid of the shadow on the sky.
The small craters in the ground lacked edge details.


Smoke:
This scene only shows for a few frames in the animation, but it's just the background, soz, you know.

Sun:
There is no blue ring around it, check your color settings.
It is meant to get choppy.