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braidon
03-25-2008, 05:20 AM
i'm not very good but, meh.
i've had flash for a year or so now, but've only animated once a month or so, what i want to get into it so, i signed up for stickpage.

partical test http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-166539.swf

boom http://www.swfup.com/file/166457#view

hmm http://www.swfup.com/file/166459#view

throw http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-166462.swf

zoom http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-166463.swf

constructive critosism please
don't be a jerk :)

SoulEater
03-25-2008, 05:31 AM
Boom- Work a bit on redrawing and easing, and try and get the particles to look more realistic. The physics were kind of off, as well.

Hmm- The thing was very small at first, so it was hard to see what was going on. There wasn't much easing involed, though. Near the end, I saw some major resizing.

Throw- The charge up wasn't too bad, but it was very wobbily, and it needs a bit more easing. I also find some of the body parts stiff.

Zoom- The redrawing needs some work. Along with the physics. The particle dissipation wasn't too bad though.

Keep practicing.

braidon
03-25-2008, 05:41 AM
thanks
it'll help heaps, and i will practise, till my brain explodes :3

Jousteh
03-25-2008, 05:58 AM
The animations were too slow.

Maybe up the fps?

braidon
03-25-2008, 06:01 AM
swfup.com screws with my animation's :|

any way UPDATE
patical test
http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-166539.swf

SoulEater
03-25-2008, 06:03 AM
I liked the first one the best. You mostly just need to add more frames, and give the smoke a bit more shape. I agree that you should up the fps as well.

Jousteh
03-25-2008, 06:09 AM
Then upload on other site:

www.antiup.net
www.swfme.com
www.*************

Tentionmaru
03-25-2008, 10:27 AM
just keep practicing every thing. I'm diggin your style so far, so with some improvement, I think it could develop into something awesome.

byondrage
03-25-2008, 11:38 AM
PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT!

remember that. Its currently driving me nuts. your doing great!

=D

braidon
03-25-2008, 04:31 PM
sweat, i'm making more now, i'll add em later :)

braidon
03-26-2008, 02:04 AM
sorry for dp, but doesn anyone know a good size for avatars in flash?