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aniking
05-02-2009, 02:00 PM
This is the sequal for Killer Stick 1, so can I come back to stickpageportal!


http://www.truploader.com/view/859644

:Smile: Improving-King!

MaxZ
05-02-2009, 02:04 PM
Oh god, my eyes. You can stay but you HAVE to improve. Jeez.

prince
05-02-2009, 02:32 PM
That was a f***'in awesome... dude

Tidus
05-02-2009, 02:32 PM
Usually people have experience in animating with any other kind of animating software before starting flash. And mostly people have some practice with the program before releasing their first animation. You obviously didn't, and this is the result; it's horrible.
I might be harsh, but come on, please?

prince
05-02-2009, 02:36 PM
Your just "horrible" to say that

prince
05-02-2009, 02:41 PM
And aniking stick with your suckie animations b****

Tidus
05-02-2009, 02:43 PM
Oh shit, I got dissed. :c

scorpix
05-02-2009, 09:11 PM
dudeeeeeeeeeee u dont erase them after u kill them

TheCreator
05-02-2009, 11:31 PM
Omfg i cant see. you burned my eyes out, work on EVERYTHING!
I might get a tab tomorrow :)

alcaknight
05-02-2009, 11:31 PM
You have definitely improved from the last one. Try looking up some tutorials.

Stonesbucket.com has some good ones.

Plague
05-03-2009, 03:32 AM
The way the blood was is terrible, instead of in each frame having a new line drawn you should do all of them on the moment of impact and have them progress BUT FAST enough for it not to look like it is being drawn on the screen.

The sticks were sloppy, it doesn't take a pro animator to draw a halfway decent stick. sometimes the people do not have arms, wtf!

You shouldn't just erase the damaged part of the sticks either.
Also, don't use effects, beams, and particles until you get better, I havn't even messed with those yet.

But I have to hand it to you, making an animation that long must have taken alot of patience, which I most certainly don't have, congrats.

And why did you ask if you could stay here, it's not up to the users to decide whether you can be here, it's yours.

I hope to see more of your animations though, it would be nice watching you get better.

Maybe look in the tutorials section to help you.

Also, if you think someone is being harsh, don't give up.
If anything it should be a motivation. Please don't give up like most of the freshly new animators do.

Vincent
05-03-2009, 03:37 AM
I think the right side of my brain just went numb.

Plague
05-03-2009, 03:42 AM
Vincent, you can say it sucked all you want (and I'm not saying it didn't).
But maybe you could do it in a more constructive way?
Because obviously he needs improvement, so I'm sure what ever C&C you have to offer will help him.