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Tidus
05-06-2009, 12:39 PM
FALCON PUNCH :D
http://www.truploader.com/view/248570

I finally fixed my mouse! Now I can FINALLY animate again, without having to re-draw every line 60 times :/.
Couldn't find the sound effect, though :C.

Tawnik
05-06-2009, 12:57 PM
=)

Its nice but I'd prefer more anticipation before he enters the screen, like tell the audience "watch out, something is coming"
that'd make it more ejoyable

Tidus
05-06-2009, 12:58 PM
Yeah I don't like the entrance either. Think I'll re-do it or something :0.

doc
05-06-2009, 01:24 PM
The effects look great, but there's something about the movement of the punch that doesn't look quite right. idk, maybe its just me.

Tawnik
05-06-2009, 01:34 PM
The effects look great, but there's something about the movement of the punch that doesn't look quite right. idk, maybe its just me.

It's his head, it should be more forward, near the right arm..

doc
05-06-2009, 02:25 PM
ah thats it, the head. Good call tawnik.
The heads are also drawn kind of sloppily

Lixu
05-07-2009, 03:09 AM
Man you are SO original.

Animation was good though.

Tidus
05-07-2009, 07:51 AM
Oh yes I AM original.
Anyways, gonna make another falconpunch very soon. One which will not fail like this D:.

Lixu
05-07-2009, 08:14 AM
Make him power-up a bit more, will make it more dramatic.

Ssjbryando
05-07-2009, 09:28 AM
Hmm..

You're jasper? o_O

that style seems familiar. Plus your dutch. You and your sexyness

I like the speed trails. I wanna copy it |:. I like it.

Tidus
05-07-2009, 10:45 AM
I just drew some speedlines, but they looked like shit, so I put 100% blur on the X side and it looked pretty awesome :).

dawG
05-07-2009, 11:01 AM
That was quite good.