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soundawk
03-25-2008, 04:39 PM
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3403/lazypunchlastbf3.gif
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3403/lazypunchlastbf3.gif

not to impressed with it in my opinion, i think the crouch went down to slow so im working on that, and i have a slight problem with the foot shake that i just cant seem to fix, im currently working on it however

if you dont recall the first test here it is

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/497/lazyje1.gif
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/497/lazyje1.gif

EDIT: ok so i already tried to fix the speed of the crouch and replaced the links, it didnt do much, i think i might have to go back and delete some frames to make it a slight bit faster, ive done so about 4 times now

DOUBLE EDIT: ok now im done and tired of going back and deleting frames ive replaced the the original for the last time
its faster but still a bit slow, stil havent figured out how to make the gif any faster

SoulEater
03-25-2008, 04:59 PM
Pretty nice. Theres good easing, and I like the movements. The wind up seemed a bit too fast, and the back leg looks weird when the stick crouches down. It might be because it doesn't bend much. The head and backbone are kind of stiff, but it's not very noticable.
Overall: Good

soundawk
03-25-2008, 05:01 PM
aight ill work on that in the piv file but im too lazy to host anymore, ive done so about 6 times already

=Rock=
03-25-2008, 05:04 PM
i dont get what the first one is doing. maybe he should step and punch down simultaneously?

soundawk
03-25-2008, 05:05 PM
he wasn't punching down, he was punching straight but as soon as the punch was over his arm went into a crouching position

Spartan EXR
03-26-2008, 10:43 AM
Smooth and good... I didn't find anything bad in the punching ani... So... ok.

Rejected
03-26-2008, 11:23 AM
on the second anim pay attention to where the head attaches to the body. his head seems to kinda come off other than that they were pretty smooth and, as far as i know, unique in style.

soundawk
03-26-2008, 11:57 AM
the head does not come off, its just the way the head reacts / the way the stick is built.