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te6
05-07-2009, 02:42 PM
ma newest in 5 months lawl, kinda got bored of pivot , starting learning flash now lol, but i kinda wanted to smthing, here we go
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/5859/last.th.gif (http://img222.imageshack.us/my.php?image=last.gif)


wadda guys think of it?

edit: i thought it was gud nuf to get out of the beginners section

sory if it was too bad :S

edit2: pic fixed now, u can clik on it

Zed
05-07-2009, 02:53 PM
I can't make it move. Do you have a link anywhere?

te6
05-07-2009, 02:59 PM
wat u mean u cant make it move? , click on the pic

edt:fixed

Zed
05-07-2009, 03:07 PM
It was quite good. I think the guy getting hit at the start was a bit stiff and uneased. He moves from standing to his reaction position but then stops dead.

I would have liked to see a bit more movement on the sword as well after the kill. Just a slow movement away from the body, instead of stopping.

Apart from that I liked it.

Xswift
05-07-2009, 04:09 PM
that was good but what Zed said Stiff and Uneased this is how you ease I= Frame

I-I--I---I----I---I--I-I

Avian
05-08-2009, 04:36 AM
Needs more easing, and as Zed said, stiff. Particles - blood, improve it.

te6
05-08-2009, 08:55 AM
ya i know me still needs to practice on blood