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Lixu
05-09-2009, 11:37 AM
http://www.filebox.me/view/bpbfn1dvk

Edit: Critics please

EDIT2: NEW TIDY COLOURED SHIT: http://filebox.me/view/40r1ngdwk

Tidus
05-09-2009, 11:42 AM
That was pretty good. It was nice and smooth, I really liked the moves, and you made good use of trails :].
Buuut, I do have some crits: When the guy pulled back his arm from the second punch, the head stopped moving, but the body did move a little bit. And I think you shouldn't have those punch sounds in it, for there was no opponent.

If you'd give it some colour and an opponent, this animation would be really awesome.

Lixu
05-09-2009, 11:43 AM
Too bored to add an enemy, I'll do it next time.
Also, without sounds it seemed kinda forceless, sounds helped.

Tidus
05-09-2009, 11:45 AM
Yeah but you could just use some whoosh and quick whoosh sounds. For some reason it makes the animation look really professional, cause all the good guys do it.

Lixu
05-09-2009, 12:05 PM
That's weird, because I am the best guy, but I don't do it, yet you say all good guys do it, so you're wrong.

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More critics? Don't talk about colouring please :P

Lixu
05-09-2009, 02:00 PM
Clean coloured fullbody as Tidus wishes: http://filebox.me/view/40r1ngdwk

Foda
05-09-2009, 02:05 PM
i like your fb...alot. you should make him fight someone.

alcaknight
05-09-2009, 02:06 PM
It looks nice, but I have only one problem.

When he goes into his side kick, I think it happens too fast.

Maybe add another frame in between.

Nice job, though!

Lixu
05-09-2009, 02:13 PM
Too lazy to add in enemy D:

Tidus
05-09-2009, 02:57 PM
I love that coloured one.
And animating reactions is fun, just do it :3.

Omega
05-09-2009, 06:35 PM
The only thing I liked was that kick flip spinning thing in the first animation. That was about the only fluid and smooth movement in both animations.

Most movements were stiff and not eased enough, imo. The second animation was definitely better than the first one (besides the spinning in the first animation) and movements were smooth in general, but did not have enough easing.

Keep practicing fullbody.

Sunder Forge
05-09-2009, 07:40 PM
Wtf were his legs doing?

BluGil
05-09-2009, 08:51 PM
new one - Legs resize when he lands. other then that its god. Add hair?

Bonk
05-09-2009, 11:35 PM
Heyhey, not bad. The movements were good enough, but the thing that really got me was the gravity, especially in the second one.

Lixu
05-10-2009, 02:08 AM
The only thing I liked was that kick flip spinning thing in the first animation. That was about the only fluid and smooth movement in both animations.

Most movements were stiff and not eased enough, imo. The second animation was definitely better than the first one (besides the spinning in the first animation) and movements were smooth in general, but did not have enough easing.

Keep practicing fullbody.
Well yeah I still gotta get used to massive bodies instead of tiny sticks I guess, I'll try keep practicing easing :)


new one - Legs resize when he lands. other then that its god. Add hair?

Yeah resizing is a bitch :/


Heyhey, not bad. The movements were good enough, but the thing that really got me was the gravity, especially in the second one.
Thanks, I'll keep practicing.

Tawnik
05-10-2009, 03:38 AM
Yeah it was good =)

Rabstar
05-10-2009, 06:41 AM
<3 The style is soo nice.
Did you block me on mSN? :'(

Nice job, I wnt you to mentor me with fb. :3

Lixu
05-10-2009, 06:49 AM
Nope I didn't Rabstar.

NinjasRule34
05-10-2009, 09:44 AM
I wish I had skill in flash:( Mentor me? You would be starting from scratch though.

Sunder Forge
05-10-2009, 10:21 AM
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Get a life .

Lixu
05-10-2009, 11:19 AM
What the **** is your problem I ignored you on purpose you stupid shit.