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alcaknight
05-09-2009, 01:05 PM
Well.. Not me. The animation.


http://www.truploader.com/view/596266

C&C would be greatly appreciated.

The background, the animation, everything. Critique it.

MaxZ
05-09-2009, 01:06 PM
Wobbly. Work on redrawing.

alcaknight
05-09-2009, 01:08 PM
Wobbly. Work on redrawing.

It was actually meant to be wobbly. I like it to look more alive. Thanks for the quick reply!

Moar!

Lixu
05-09-2009, 01:13 PM
Awesome tree art, okay animation. The green thing on the monster's back is resizing too much.

alcaknight
05-09-2009, 01:17 PM
Awesome tree art, okay animation. The green thing on the monster's back is resizing too much.

Thanks! Yeah, I noticed that too. I am going to try and fix that.

Lixu
05-09-2009, 01:24 PM
You totally should, other then that its a great animation. I really like the wobbling in the monster ;) Gives a cartoony feel.

tickbaby
05-11-2009, 08:19 PM
That kinda scared me. Other than that it was awesome. lol.

N T
05-11-2009, 08:24 PM
um, was it a tree or a monster... i'm confused. cuz your title says i are tree. sweet animation tho anyway :D i like how it loops

alcaknight
05-12-2009, 05:15 AM
Yep its a tree and thanks!

doc
05-12-2009, 12:38 PM
If the green on the back is supposed to be leaves, you might want to add a bit more detail to it. Make it more like the trees in the bg, maybe with a few more shades. But good overall