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Foda
05-09-2009, 07:38 PM
http://www.truploader.com/view/902035



please if you say crap tell me how i can improve.

alcaknight
05-09-2009, 07:40 PM
Nicely done! I would add a little more blood though. Not enough particles for me.

Omega
05-09-2009, 08:14 PM
Needs lots of easing.
Smoother movements.
More fluidity, that's for sure.
Movements need much, much more force.
You need to learn to pace movements; they're too quick and have no flow between them.
Blood was pretty bad; particles did not really have gravity applied and was drawn badly on the ground.
The broken wall pieces did not bounce and had no physics.

Keep working, I can see you getting the hang of it sooner or later. Really.

Foda
05-09-2009, 08:18 PM
Needs lots of easing.
Smoother movements.
More fluidity, that's for sure.
Movements need much, much more force.
You need to learn to pace movements; they're too quick and have no flow between them.
Blood was pretty bad; particles did not really have gravity applied and was drawn badly on the ground.
The broken wall pieces did not bounce and had no physics.

Keep working, I can see you getting the hang of it sooner or later. Really.




holy s*** that is a lot of stuff to do but thank you for the information.