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croft70
05-11-2009, 06:20 PM
mmm did you remember i make some animation a lot of time ago well i was making it better so well that what i go is an test i upload 2 animation on newgrounds so if you want to see it come to my profile
www.crafto.newgrounds.com

well this is the animation/test

www.truploader.com/view/041266

i didn put the sound already so what do you think?

sorry i dont speak english good


this is other one this one dont have sound because when i put it the flash close and i dont save the file

http://www.truploader.com/view/841153

tickbaby
05-11-2009, 08:09 PM
I wish I could animate that good lol.

BluGil
05-11-2009, 08:20 PM
The movements are too fast and he never really moves upward. More up and down motion will make the overall energy and flow seem better. Sounds like ****in feng shui. Just do it.

Tronika
05-11-2009, 08:51 PM
in the first move he stands like 0.01 sec before he falls.. thats bad, maybe deleting some frame it will look better

And the kick.. ehm.. idk i dont like it maybe some of anticipation will help there

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doc
05-12-2009, 12:41 PM
I really liked the top one, but its way too fast. Slow it down and it will be great