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FoShizzle
05-13-2009, 05:54 PM
http://filebox.me/view/z7jny72v2

UPDATED: http://filebox.me/view/7a3sfyi0j


I didn't do a Falcon Punch cause i'm still practicing ma skills.

band_it
05-13-2009, 06:08 PM
lol
that's awesum!!!!
it's so clean XD
and u still told me I'm better???
lol

anyway the jump is weird, it loks like it just throw some smoke out of it's shoes...

and the camera change is too fast..
try to make an angle movements before it change the camera position.. (or at least make it longer before the camera change..)

other than that it's nice, continue it!! :3

FoShizzle
05-13-2009, 06:11 PM
Thanks Band, your better than me because your particles are amazing.
And I get what your sayin about the shoes, I just wanted to show more movement. But now that I look at it, It looks like shoes that enable flying :O
Anyways, I think it goes too fast because of the black frames. I guess If I take em' out It will be better.

I dunno how to continue it ._.

UPDATE: http://filebox.me/view/7a3sfyi0j

band_it
05-13-2009, 06:16 PM
ookay....
just experiment ur skill on angles movements, ant movements :P

and, I just noticed it, ur anims never shown a great amount of particles . =_=
lol, it's ur style anyway :P

and, just make that guy run and jump from cliff to cliff... that would be cool :D

FoShizzle
05-13-2009, 06:19 PM
Even better idea... Make him jump off a clif, WHILE FIGHTING NINJAS IN MID AIR.
Land into a dark hole, there he fights monsters and dies.

Devour
05-13-2009, 08:09 PM
After the running scene where it zooms in on his back, the character gets all sloppy.
For one thing, it didn't look at all like the character bent his knees enough to jump as high as he did. And the part where he was swinging the stick around looks sloppy and the character is wobbily. The start is amazing, though.

FoShizzle
05-13-2009, 08:36 PM
Thanks Devour, I'm still learning how to control the character. Which means how to make him still look as smooth and not as wobbily.
I got lazy at the end so it looks.. lazy I guess. I'll fix that later.

Karthago
05-15-2009, 06:45 AM
pretty cool! but the jump looks awkward. you dont jump that way.

FoShizzle
05-16-2009, 08:32 AM
I don't know how to fix the jump.

stare
05-17-2009, 10:02 AM
When he jumped it was more of a leap.
When you jump you usually lead with one of your feet.
If you want to fix the jump you'll have to make him lead with one of his feet.
Oh and when he...summoned the bow staff, his arm was too skinny.
Other than that a good animation, continue it.