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Aycaramba
03-26-2008, 07:32 AM
I have joined many collabs latley, so I want some C&C on the following animations;
Hill Collab (http://www.swfup.com/file/167618)


Stair Collab (http://www.swfup.com/file/167620)


Pass The Salt Mini Joint (http://www.swfup.com/file/167628)

zymn
03-26-2008, 07:58 AM
they are rather decent. good work.

Badass
03-26-2008, 08:57 AM
Damn i liked it.

Aycaramba
03-26-2008, 12:35 PM
k. Now can I get some c&c?

byondrage
03-26-2008, 12:44 PM
i see you had to change the salt graphic to your own, i was confused till i figured it out.

i like them.

DUCKKITE!

Aycaramba
03-26-2008, 12:50 PM
no, that was the original.
I think Jawz changed it.
But that was good, because I rushed it.
DUCKKITE FTW.

Kitsune
03-26-2008, 01:17 PM
Great job! They're all well done!

Join my collab. :3 I hope you have the time. :D
C&C:

Hill: I don't see much wrong here. A bit of resizing on the last bounce, the explosion of sorts at the end could be a bit more slow to begin and fast up to the screen. Just a bit. No slow-motion here is necessary. :D

Stairs: physics and speed are a tad confusing here. A bit faster on both would help in my opinion, but your style is fine, it seems. The other body parts come up later. I don't see where they came from on the body. I see the effect, but no cause. You may want to show that concept of the body parts flying forward a bit clearer to your audience.

Salt: I found the beginning well done and entertaining. The flip had nice eased physics, and the inverted pop effects were nice! The only part that I found a bit off was that on the stick figure's blood coming out was only on the impact. The blood just stopped coming out. It disappeared after hitting him! I found that part a bit odd.

Aycaramba
03-26-2008, 01:45 PM
I <3 you.
You give good critism.
Ill join your collab as soon as i get home.
Yeah, some things were a bit off.
Its too late to fix that now, But thanks.

Kitsune
03-26-2008, 01:56 PM
I <3 you.
You give good critism.
Ill join your collab as soon as i get home.
Yeah, some things were a bit off.
Its too late to fix that now, But thanks.

I mean to help your next animations. Thank you for saying I give good criticism. I take that to heart. :3

leo4life
03-26-2008, 04:24 PM
animations was good, but i think u should work on drawing ur sticks, they look rather.. lumpy

Etch
03-26-2008, 05:29 PM
Smoother sticks. But I love the style. Double Framing yes?

Aycaramba
03-27-2008, 04:42 AM
Some of it.

the afro ninja
03-27-2008, 06:00 AM
ooohhh me likey

Aycaramba
03-27-2008, 10:27 AM
Afro head, I want C&C not some 'ooohhh me likey' stuff.
but im glad you liked it.