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band_it
05-19-2009, 06:14 AM
yeah..
just a try on 24 fps....

and finally I have my own style :D

here's it http://www.truploader.com/view/875000
and it's won't be finished :P

c&C?


and thanks to SSj (I got the easing pattern from his anim :D)


http://www.truploader.com/view/456378
slower version

N T
05-19-2009, 06:26 AM
i liked it alot. i think you should finish it. it was a bit fast though, couldn't tell what happened at one part.

Bonk
05-19-2009, 06:43 AM
Whoa, too fast, but it was just eased poses so it's mildly acceptable. Slow it down, ease the jump more (it was sudden, and lacked force other than unrealistic speed), and overall make it more realistic.

Also, do you really want your abbreviation to be "Bi"?

band_it
05-19-2009, 07:29 AM
i liked it alot. i think you should finish it. it was a bit fast though, couldn't tell what happened at one part.
no I won't..
and maybe I'll post the slower one..


Whoa, too fast, but it was just eased poses so it's mildly acceptable. Slow it down, ease the jump more (it was sudden, and lacked force other than unrealistic speed), and overall make it more realistic.

Also, do you really want your abbreviation to be "Bi"?

like I said I'll post the slower one...
(it looks more realistic :P)

and... why with B_i ?
as long as you don't exclude the underscore :P





http://www.truploader.com/view/456378
20 fps..
and it look unrealistic.. and the double framing suks...

MaxZ
05-19-2009, 08:08 AM
It's kind of wobbly.

BluGil
05-19-2009, 02:24 PM
its still too goddamn fast. its like u just used one frame to travel the whole damn screen. i dont like it. >:/ sorry for being so frank.

undagada
05-19-2009, 03:03 PM
Hmm you've got a good style, there's a lot of potential, but like everyone said, it's too fast.

Don't be afraid to double frame in some parts (climax), it actually helps out your animation.