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jmadlock108
05-24-2009, 02:48 PM
here's a few of my anis

heavy spacing
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/JMadlock108/heavy_spacing_2ngib.gif

run
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/JMadlock108/test_1abh8.gif

some camera tricks
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/JMadlock108/camera_tricks809d.gif

a short part of my series
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/JMadlock108/series_preview_214bd.gif

Liquid
05-24-2009, 02:50 PM
Alright, well obviously you've used pivot before.

Zed
05-24-2009, 02:54 PM
You need to work on that run. The front leg doesn't extend far enough so it looks awkward and stiff.

Flood
05-24-2009, 04:21 PM
Alright, well obviously you've used pivot before.

I'm glad you gave him good C&C.

The run looks sissy as hell. It looks like a girl prancing. Extend the legs more to fix it.

pivotcarnival
05-24-2009, 07:12 PM
hmmm - good work choppy and you need to work on easing but good work - keep practicing. - you'll get there.

Zed
05-25-2009, 12:56 AM
Actually, choppiness and easing were two things that I thought he did relatively well.

Scarecrow
05-25-2009, 01:23 AM
Good work so far, you should post something a little longer.

Also, have a look at this:

http://www.sport-fitness-advisor.com/images/sprinting_technique_maxspeed.jpg

You seem to be missing the entire "vii" part in your running loop. Try adding them in, a run cycle looks much better with them.

Kieran.
05-25-2009, 02:21 AM
Actually, choppiness and easing were two things that I thought he did relatively well.

Yea, that guy didn't even look at the animations.

Anyway, great work. Loveing the effects.

poppetje3D
05-25-2009, 08:37 AM
Idk maybe its my computer.
But everything is very slow.

Rival
05-25-2009, 09:03 AM
It's your computer.
Run is weird, what scarecrow said. Also the last one is a bit stiff.

Avian
05-25-2009, 09:41 AM
The run is awkward.

Bpanther13
05-25-2009, 06:20 PM
The running is just embarassing compared to the other stuff, dude. Watch a track meet or something and adjust. And for the running, don't move the damn scene.