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sweetpl
05-24-2009, 11:23 PM
Dow do ya think?

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/1267/222j.gif

FoShizzle
05-25-2009, 12:45 AM
Wow, that's actually pretty good for your first. You need to work on alot of things though. Nice work.

Kieran.
05-25-2009, 02:18 AM
And those things would be:

Wobblyness
A plot
Particles
Easing
Anticipation
Force
Physics
General movements.

Get workin..

stare
05-25-2009, 09:01 AM
Way to be subtle krome, if you need clarification on anything
krome said you should work on just ask.
Otherwise he basicly got it all...

Rival
05-25-2009, 09:04 AM
You know, general movements and physics aren't that different from each other :S

stare
05-25-2009, 09:17 AM
Yes they are.
General movements are...well moving running, jumping, punching, etc.
But physics are how his arm will fall after a punch, or how high he will jump.
=D

Hush
05-25-2009, 09:21 AM
I say it is great for the starting relm, i'm defenitley putting this in my novelty collection with all the other animators and thier famous work.personaly i don't exactly bieleve sweeptl knows of we are saying. check prospects thread it is some were way back it will teach basic physics i geuss. i'd also recommend To study up on frozen pheonix he has alot of good flash animations, get some insparation you know

Avian
05-25-2009, 09:48 AM
For your first it was excellent,
but it was way choppy, and it lacked easing. Physics were off, as well.
(And everything the others said.)

Ah, and weird storyline.