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cd sticks
05-26-2009, 12:17 AM
hope this works
http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/397/65650327.gif

Liquid
05-26-2009, 01:14 AM
Beginner's section.

poppetje3D
05-26-2009, 07:12 AM
It waszorz stiff , choppy and the physics were very off.
Just practice more and u will be good.

cd sticks
05-26-2009, 11:36 PM
http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/9428/anovsanov.gif

cd sticks
05-26-2009, 11:42 PM
http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/8596/stickemsomewherez.gif

Liquid
05-26-2009, 11:42 PM
Oh my god, fail.

cd sticks
05-26-2009, 11:44 PM
http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/9940/bails1.gif

cd sticks
05-26-2009, 11:49 PM
http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/4135/guna.gif

Zed
05-27-2009, 04:01 AM
Your second one is not an animation, it is a printscreen of your desktop, and there is a seperate thread for that. The third one lacks the basic principles of animation.

The last two are better, but still low beginner. The first (out of these two) appears to briefly become a lollipop, is very choppy, and quite stiff. You need to add more frames in the middle and work on moving more limbs each frame. The second is, again, stiff and choppy. The same comments apply, also the gun will have some kick so you need to bring the hand up as it fires.

Lastly, never use the base stick and actually spend some time on your animations.

Cronos
05-27-2009, 05:02 AM
1. post you animation smaller. (when you save them, resise to 50%)

2. Post them all on the same post (You can just edit the first post)

3. You seem to be falling into a trap alot of beginners fall into. Ill give it to you straight... They all looked like shit, there were no plausibly possible movements, physics where slow and boring, and your using the default.

Not being mean but it had to be said, and alot of people are like you. Go to http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=22662 read the whole thing, listen to what he says and practice, practice, practice.

Focus on

Movements first. eg. punching, kicking, running, walking, jumping ect.

then

Physics. eg Try doing some ball physics, through some sticks of buildings ect.

then

Easing and antisipation. eg. in your punches, kicks, running ect.

then

Effects. Try out some effects

Also put more frames in (if you want it it look good you need to take time on it, not rush it)

When youve done all that post again. (You dont need to post in the beginners section, but people will get less annoyed if you do)

kongquake
05-27-2009, 05:03 AM
cool your animation if you speed your animations are really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cronos
05-27-2009, 05:34 AM
Learn to type. It wasnt good so dont encourage him to continue doing the same thing. Give him critisism.

FoShizzle
05-27-2009, 06:13 AM
I ****ing lol'd

Avian
05-27-2009, 11:23 AM
Cd Sticks, if someone tells you to go to beginners section (and that person isn't a noob), go there.

So ****ing go to the Beginners sekshun.

captainaction
05-27-2009, 12:03 PM
Besides what was already said, you need to use different, more detailed figures for stuff like the gun, the bullet, and the casing. If you have trouble making your own, you can download them places too (but personally I prefer to be creative).

You really need to keep practicing, because so far your stuff looks pretty bad.

sheezy2
05-27-2009, 10:07 PM
Holy friggen ballsacs. Instead of posting animaitons that came out of your ass in 2 seconds, spend some time; get to know pivot. Your current animations are utterly horrible, fyi.

cd sticks
05-28-2009, 01:40 AM
I hope this is better D;
http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/4628/goodo.gif

Zed
05-28-2009, 01:44 AM
It looks like you've tried to ease it which is good, but you haven't quite done it on all the movements. Remember to ease everything. And again do not use the default stick.

Cronos
05-28-2009, 02:38 AM
Holy friggen ballsacs. Instead of posting animaitons that came out of your ass in 2 seconds, spend some time; get to know pivot. Your current animations are utterly horrible, fyi.


Change the tagline under your name, its racist.

cd sticks: Im guessing you didnt listen to anything i said on the last page...

When you save as a .gif:

For 2.5: Uncheck merge, resize 50% and frame delay 6
For 3: Uncheck merge, resize 50% and supersample 4

There was no easing in that animation at all. Also dont use the default, either make your own or download one from www.droidz.org (http://www.droidz.org)

Go to this page http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=22662 when youve read it post again.

rozzer
05-28-2009, 05:28 AM
CD i'm a beginer and if u go to the beginers section u'll see my animations and tbh my first one was better, there crap and the bails one, OMG wth is with the lolipop in the middle xD its like u tried to repeat the frames cos ur to damn lazy i'm totaly with cronos here, do wat he says

Zed
05-28-2009, 05:34 AM
There was no easing in that animation at all.

Lies! There's a tiny tiny bit at the apex of the first swing of the arm. Looking at it, it may have been accidental, but I tells ya 'tis there.

Avian
05-28-2009, 11:13 AM
I hope this is better D;
http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/4628/goodo.gif
1. The easing was shit. It was very stiff, as well.
2. Check some tutorials.

And when the **** will you go to the beginners section ?

Rival
05-28-2009, 11:17 AM
He doesn't have to, so he goes when he want.

I SUGGEST beginners section though. You will get better critisism there. Here you will only get shouted for having bad anims.

rozzer
05-28-2009, 12:12 PM
its crap give up is my suggestion xD

Rival
05-28-2009, 01:48 PM
Then i'd say the same to you.

Xswift
05-28-2009, 07:27 PM
If your a beginner POST IT ON THE BEGINNERS SECTION ON TOP!

Cronos
05-29-2009, 01:44 AM
Lies! There's a tiny tiny bit at the apex of the first swing of the arm. Looking at it, it may have been accidental, but I tells ya 'tis there.

Hmm indeed, you speak the truth, how could i miss such epic easing :D