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smiley099
05-26-2009, 05:18 PM
enjoy! *************/open/1243379791

live2wrestle
05-26-2009, 05:23 PM
http://*************/open/1243379791
There ya go.

alcaknight
05-26-2009, 05:54 PM
Nice for your very first. The punch was too slow. Delete one of the key frames when he is thrusting his arm forward to make it look faster. Get rid of the blur. It doesn't look good. Make sure that his feet don't resize, and make the feet smaller. Pretty wobbly, but it will leave with time. His knee juts out weird also. May want him to take a step forward when he punches.

smiley099
05-26-2009, 05:56 PM
its very hard to keep the feet from resizing i tried uber hard maybe i should just copy paste the same foot and place like i did with zeh head and ill try to speed it up but i do kinda like the blur

Pepsi.
05-26-2009, 06:35 PM
I dont think you should copy and paste the feet...

Just doesn't seem like a good idea to me. You can try though.

smiley099
05-26-2009, 06:47 PM
then i relized the first thing i draw is the feet i cant make a realist ic bodie unleass i do lolz i guess ill just ajust then after im done animating

Avian
05-27-2009, 11:37 AM
Nice for your first, but you could increase the framerate, and it was choppy 'n wobbly.