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stickmaster87
05-26-2009, 08:53 PM
second flash:Happy: http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/3904/60283074.gif

alcaknight
05-26-2009, 09:09 PM
Okay, much better than your first. But it seems like it didn't have much effort put into it. The sticks are very wobbly, but it will decrease with practice. The stick construction is better than your first, but not quite there yet.
Take a look at this animation. (Mine)
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/495213
In there, there is a stick with smoke, and he is popping out of the ground and stuff. Look at his stick construction. Try and copy it, but maybe make the legs a little less long.