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Hundo
05-27-2009, 06:14 PM
I keep trying this over and over, and i still feel like something is wrong.

http://filebox.me/view/s08z4mrk4
http://filebox.me/view/f8b9iq75f
http://filebox.me/view/pd99tx5be
http://filebox.me/view/hmyq7mt6m

the first two suck, and the last two are OK.

Covalence
05-27-2009, 06:31 PM
Your problem is that the limb movements are choppy and stiff, and the run itself doesn't look like it loops. The last 2 aren't ok imo, and I think the best thing you could do is study other running animations, and watch some track videos on Youtube.

Cizzil
05-27-2009, 06:41 PM
I actually thought the first was the best.

BluGil
05-27-2009, 07:14 PM
Make him lean forward. You can make the whole body go up and down as he runs. make it a lot more dynamic, and be sure to include the joints in the legs and arms. right now the arms look stiff. Youve got elbows. and so should your stick

Blot
05-27-2009, 08:03 PM
make him lift the knees more, and i think ur using line tool which is ok, but brush is better

alcaknight
05-27-2009, 08:14 PM
make him lift the knees more, and i think ur using line tool which is ok, but brush is better

That is only your opinion.

Cizzil
05-27-2009, 08:17 PM
He is using brush. you can tell.

Kieran.
05-28-2009, 02:25 AM
Normally peoples back bends a bit when running. Also, It needs to be more fluid, and not having the back/head stationary.

Btw, the last one was with line and the rest were brush.

Tawnik
05-28-2009, 08:11 AM
-His body, head should bounce up and down
-Every frame, when you connect the legs, the body should be in the middle of the line you get (just higher)
-His arms should move different way

http://www.truploader.com/view/557592

I made this a couple of days ago for one guy here, I hope it will help you too, it was just a short "Show-how" animation.

you can download the fla here

http://www.truploader.com/view/285860

Hundo
05-28-2009, 06:59 PM
Thanks, Tawnik.