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Blot
05-29-2009, 06:07 AM
http://www.truploader.com/view/645398

:D

Cronos
05-29-2009, 07:25 AM
The first punch is good, its choppy on the elbow, and the kick needs to be extened more, also the other stickmans reaction to the stick seams stiff while he flies through the air.

good job though :D

Blot
05-29-2009, 09:27 AM
thanks first fight in flash moree

doc
05-29-2009, 02:15 PM
It was ok, but I have some crits. There are a few frames in the middle where it looks like you double framed it, when there was no need for it. Either that or it just gets really choppy. The guy's reactions are also a bit bland, but overall they're decent. And the last kick lacks force, and I think its because the other guy is too close, so there is no chance to extend the leg.
Ik that sounds pretty harsh, but overall it was pretty good, especially for your first.

Blot
05-29-2009, 05:31 PM
thanks and i did double frame in the middle to slow it down

Rabstar
05-30-2009, 12:24 AM
Bad stick style, but better than I last saw it.
pretty nice first punch, but maybe ease it a bit more? Im not sure.
The kick was choppy, and you tryed to make it look unchoppy by double framing it, which made it worse, IMO. lol.

The reactiions were alright.


BIG IMPROVEMENT, NICE. >.<

Blot
05-30-2009, 12:26 AM
THANKS u were right rabstar u inspired me a couple of days ago

Orange Blob
05-30-2009, 12:33 AM
First punch was good. moving into the elbow was bad and so was the elbow.
Kick wasn't followed through and the stickman flew to much, he should be like a ragdoll, moves back but slumps so he doesn't just fly away. If you want the stickman to fly away you must give your kick some added strength.

Blot
05-30-2009, 12:55 AM
ok thanks, i willfocus on doing more punches like my punch :3