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Slayergr
06-01-2009, 08:55 PM
:Bricked: hurt dont it

Slayergr
06-01-2009, 09:00 PM
heres a few,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Scarecrow
06-01-2009, 10:47 PM
Please post your animations in the beginner's thread in the future:
http://stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=35330

Posting your animations outside the beginner's thread implies that you want us to review your animations harshly, but in the beginner's thread you will receive criticism appropriate to your level and we will not sound like we hate you.

We don't actually hate you you just have a long way to go.

Avian
06-02-2009, 10:52 AM
Beginners .

Rival
06-02-2009, 10:57 AM
Wow, at least tell him whats wrong.

At the shooting gun, It was very stiff, uneased and choppy. It should have a backfire but there is barely/nothing. The gun is also too big for the guy's hand. Blood, doesn't come out of nowhere, it comes out of something, you should make a blood trail.

At the fall thing: Theres not much to say only that its weird if you fall from that high you just stick in the middle of the spear. You go right through the end of the spear. Also you speed up when falling.

I suggest beginners section, You will get better critisism and people won't yell at you that fast.

Zed
06-02-2009, 11:19 AM
No easing anywhere. Very choppy everywhere. Stiff as my ruler. Poor blood effects. Unrealistic movements. Physics will be an issue somewhere, maybe in the way the guy's falling over after he's been shot, maybe in the way the other guy falls/stops falling.

I strongly recomend you post in the beginners section, look at some tutorials, and show some origionality by making your own stks wherever possible.

Avian
06-02-2009, 11:58 AM
Wow, at least tell him whats wrong.

At the shooting gun, It was very stiff, uneased and choppy. It should have a backfire but there is barely/nothing. The gun is also too big for the guy's hand. Blood, doesn't come out of nowhere, it comes out of something, you should make a blood trail.

At the fall thing: Theres not much to say only that its weird if you fall from that high you just stick in the middle of the spear. You go right through the end of the spear. Also you speed up when falling.

I suggest beginners section, You will get better critisism and people won't yell at you that fast.
I'm waiting until he goes to the beginners section, and then I'll crit.

s-t-y-x
06-05-2009, 04:02 PM
keep practicing it makes perfect :D

edwin711
06-07-2009, 12:48 PM
there should be a back fire and i hate to do this but i do agree with rival about the falling and the gun

the_jizz_master
06-07-2009, 01:14 PM
good god these videos killed my raging bonner

Zed
06-07-2009, 01:46 PM
You are no master of jizz if you cannot summon and maintain a boner on demand. You still have much to learn. I can get from flacid to climax in thirty seconds; come back when you can beat it.

Rival
06-07-2009, 01:48 PM
0_o

Oh..........My............God..........

I can.... what can I? Hm....

the_jizz_master
06-07-2009, 01:59 PM
You are no master of jizz if you cannot summon and maintain a boner on demand. You still have much to learn. I can get from flacid to climax in thirty seconds; come back when you can beat it.

lol half-a-minuteman

Zed
06-07-2009, 02:04 PM
You gotta be able to hold it back too. Premature ejaculation alone does not qualify a jizz master. It's jizzing on demand that's necessary.

I could've worded it better, yes.

ScatMan
06-07-2009, 09:14 PM
Stiff as 2D's moms penis.
Beginners.
EDIT: SHIT****SHIT
That was a comment on the animation, not the previous conversation.
Also, I can summon boner on demand. I have a photographic memory and I can picture people in my head in whatever clothing I feel like.
Also, Firefox has a correction option for SHIT****SHIT as BLACKSHORTS and KNEESPLINTS
The ****

Avian
06-08-2009, 11:10 AM
...
Get the ******* and don't bump old threads like other noobs.

the_jizz_master
06-08-2009, 11:24 AM
this thread was only made a cuple of days ago, honey

Avian
06-08-2009, 11:26 AM
6 days. I consider it's old.

the_jizz_master
06-08-2009, 11:34 AM
lol u must like watching mtv then, honey

Rival
06-08-2009, 11:34 AM
Whut the F*** has that to do with this, faggot?

the_jizz_master
06-08-2009, 11:38 AM
whao calm down honey, no need to get fussin. maybe if i pm u some cool pics ull get on my goodside ;)

Rival
06-08-2009, 02:10 PM
AAAAH I'M GONNNA REPORT THAT ****ING PIC!!!

You are honestly weird.

Zed
06-08-2009, 02:16 PM
He only sent you one? And I think he's safe from reports, it's PM. Besides, don't feed the troll. Don't point out the 'current project' thread. It's called learning.

Rival
06-08-2009, 02:36 PM
Yah, I knew :3

the_jizz_master
06-08-2009, 06:26 PM
AAAAH I'M GONNNA REPORT THAT ****ING PIC!!!

You are honestly weird.

snitches get stiches, babe

Scarecrow
06-08-2009, 07:15 PM
lost interest

Avian
06-09-2009, 09:34 AM
lol u must like watching mtv then, honey
-_-

I don't watch MTV.