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doc
06-03-2009, 03:58 PM
This is a game I made as an English project. It is based off of the book Night by Elie Wiesel. It was going great, up until the end, where a whole bunch of it turned to crap. Unfortunately, this is due tomorrow, so I don't have any time to make it better. So, enjoy... or try to.
http://www.truploader.com/view/114677
Oh, and I also didn't have enough time to add sounds.
Just press space to continue the dialog.

deleted
06-03-2009, 04:37 PM
it just stops right after he says, "jews, you must follow me under hitler's orfers!" is that it, or am i missing something, cuz i was clicking everywhere, and nothing happened

doc
06-03-2009, 04:43 PM
?????
thats not good. one sec, lemme check on that.
Edit: Oh, my bad, I forgot to put that in there. Just press Space.

deleted
06-03-2009, 04:46 PM
oooo kthnxbai... ill go and try it again.
tried it. it was okay. the part when you duel the general is too hard though. While fighting the soldiers, there should be some element of stealth. They just immediatley turn. And the general is impossible to beat. But it was cool so you should get a good grade.

doc
06-03-2009, 06:33 PM
Was the general realy that hard? Uh oh that means my teacher will never get past it D:
And the stealth would've been pretty hard to do. I was thinking about it, but then realized I didn't have enough time to do it.
Thanks!

deleted
06-03-2009, 07:39 PM
the soldiers were passable, very passable. but it just seemed odd. The general was impossible though. i tried everything i could think of. his sword was just too long. he got 2 hits in the time it took you to make 1

doc
06-04-2009, 03:54 AM
Well you were supposed to block with spacebar. That was in the little help thing. Once you block, he backs up and is stunned for a moment. Then you go in, hit him once, and ran away.

Bonk
06-04-2009, 05:20 AM
Shit son, that was excellent. A little more polish would have been good, but the coding was solid. This has inspired me somewhat, although I probably won't act on it :D

Kieran.
06-04-2009, 12:40 PM
Since when are you set flash projects in English!

doc
06-04-2009, 02:46 PM
haha it was a creative assignment, and I felt like makin a game :D
And wow, thanks bonk! Yeah, there would've been much more polishing up, but it was due today :P

Arch-Angel
06-04-2009, 03:49 PM
You should move the tree layer above the character.

doc
06-04-2009, 06:01 PM
OK, thanks, you're right.