View Full Version : Retest: Line (Rab)

06-06-2009, 06:30 AM

Non - vcam version:


Line test after watching Miccool's animations. :3
CC please!

06-06-2009, 06:55 AM
Wow that's not too bad, Rabstar! The thud sound was really annoying, and the animation went a tad too fast so maybe slow it down, OR add more easing which you also lack in this one.

But none the less good job, you're improving allot.

06-06-2009, 07:05 AM
Hah, I have to give all my creds to miccool ther, he inspired me with his awsomeness.
I think the vcam might have made it look fast...I'll reupload the non - vcam one.

06-06-2009, 07:20 AM
Wow, that was great. A lot of force in that, I like it. The last move was a little awkward though.

06-06-2009, 07:22 AM
<3 thanks man.
I didn't know what to do, so I just made him jump...Then I couldn't be bothered to elbow, so I took his whole body down.

06-06-2009, 07:22 AM
-Vcam +Entertainment.

Kill that thud sound.

06-06-2009, 07:26 AM
Hah, thanks.
I CBA to delete it...You can hardly hear it either.

06-06-2009, 07:36 AM
a bit o resizing,
also what's up with the kick where he doesn't hit anything

still i really liked it, the bubble impact thingo things are pretty cool
it might be a good decision to keep with that style, keep practicing it, and watch more of miccools animations.

btw i actually haven't seen many of miccools animations, but i still know what his style is like


06-06-2009, 07:55 AM
You've god really good but still, dont forget, stickfigures shouldnt resize !!! =D

06-06-2009, 08:46 AM
Hah, yeah...I always do the sticks quick, so I forget about resizing, then hope no-one notices it :p

The kick was dodged. :3

Should I stick with this style? :O

06-06-2009, 08:50 AM
Make longer animations with backgrounds please :3
I'm not going to say any names, but that animation makes you better than at least two people in this thread.

06-06-2009, 08:54 AM
<3 thanks.
I am thinking of making a long animation, but someone...*cough* tomocles *cough* Needs to make me a bg, no rush. :3

06-06-2009, 08:58 AM
I can make you a background D=
1- I'm lazy
2- It's going to have to wait at least a week =/


06-06-2009, 09:02 AM
Sure. :D

800 x 400 please! :D <3
ima be using vcam

06-06-2009, 09:07 AM
Give me around 15 days or so.
I'll be going on vacation tomorrow until next Sunday. It should take me a day or two when I'm home. If you feel like waiting.

06-06-2009, 09:09 AM
you said 1 week! O.O
I want to aniamte soooooon. >:3
Pwease can you start it now? I will give you GINOURMAS creds

06-06-2009, 09:44 AM
I don't have my tablet with me . . . It would suck big time.

You can do this though:
Make a new flash document (Has to be flash 8), make 2 layers with two long lines. Make them different colors so I can tell them apart (They have to be on separate layers). One will be the motion line where the animation takes place, the other will be where the floor area of the background stops. (You don't have to do that line). I will draw the background and edit it into the animation when I get back. It's easy.

06-06-2009, 03:45 PM
nice man, A lot of improvement here. : ) keep it up.

06-07-2009, 07:08 AM
nice man, A lot of improvement here. : ) keep it up.

<3 yay!

Arch, amazing idea, I'll do it! <3

06-07-2009, 07:16 AM
That's kewl!
btw why is there 15 character post rule?

06-07-2009, 10:44 AM
That's kewl!
btw why is there 15 character post rule?
to avoid spamming

I really like that style. too much sound though, the footstep were too loud.

06-07-2009, 12:04 PM
o rly

power fuse0
06-07-2009, 02:23 PM
NAaaaaaaasty resizing at the end.
Alright though. Over use of the bubble thing though

06-08-2009, 06:33 AM
Lol, bubble thing :p
Thanks all, for the comments :D