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Rabstar
06-06-2009, 06:30 AM
http://www.truploader.com/view/849713

Non - vcam version:

http://www.truploader.com/view/461925

Line test after watching Miccool's animations. :3
CC please!

Lixu
06-06-2009, 06:55 AM
Wow that's not too bad, Rabstar! The thud sound was really annoying, and the animation went a tad too fast so maybe slow it down, OR add more easing which you also lack in this one.

But none the less good job, you're improving allot.

Rabstar
06-06-2009, 07:05 AM
Hah, I have to give all my creds to miccool ther, he inspired me with his awsomeness.
I think the vcam might have made it look fast...I'll reupload the non - vcam one.

-Hawk-
06-06-2009, 07:20 AM
Wow, that was great. A lot of force in that, I like it. The last move was a little awkward though.

Rabstar
06-06-2009, 07:22 AM
<3 thanks man.
I didn't know what to do, so I just made him jump...Then I couldn't be bothered to elbow, so I took his whole body down.

Lixu
06-06-2009, 07:22 AM
-Vcam +Entertainment.

Kill that thud sound.

Rabstar
06-06-2009, 07:26 AM
Hah, thanks.
I CBA to delete it...You can hardly hear it either.

Clips
06-06-2009, 07:36 AM
a bit o resizing,
also what's up with the kick where he doesn't hit anything

still i really liked it, the bubble impact thingo things are pretty cool
it might be a good decision to keep with that style, keep practicing it, and watch more of miccools animations.

btw i actually haven't seen many of miccools animations, but i still know what his style is like

-awesome

Tawnik
06-06-2009, 07:55 AM
You've god really good but still, dont forget, stickfigures shouldnt resize !!! =D

Rabstar
06-06-2009, 08:46 AM
Hah, yeah...I always do the sticks quick, so I forget about resizing, then hope no-one notices it :p

The kick was dodged. :3

Should I stick with this style? :O

Arch-Angel
06-06-2009, 08:50 AM
Make longer animations with backgrounds please :3
I'm not going to say any names, but that animation makes you better than at least two people in this thread.

Rabstar
06-06-2009, 08:54 AM
<3 thanks.
I am thinking of making a long animation, but someone...*cough* tomocles *cough* Needs to make me a bg, no rush. :3

Arch-Angel
06-06-2009, 08:58 AM
I can make you a background D=
1- I'm lazy
2- It's going to have to wait at least a week =/

lawl.

Rabstar
06-06-2009, 09:02 AM
Sure. :D
BG PLESAE! :D

800 x 400 please! :D <3
ima be using vcam

Arch-Angel
06-06-2009, 09:07 AM
Give me around 15 days or so.
I'll be going on vacation tomorrow until next Sunday. It should take me a day or two when I'm home. If you feel like waiting.

Rabstar
06-06-2009, 09:09 AM
you said 1 week! O.O
I want to aniamte soooooon. >:3
Pwease can you start it now? I will give you GINOURMAS creds

Arch-Angel
06-06-2009, 09:44 AM
I don't have my tablet with me . . . It would suck big time.

You can do this though:
Make a new flash document (Has to be flash 8), make 2 layers with two long lines. Make them different colors so I can tell them apart (They have to be on separate layers). One will be the motion line where the animation takes place, the other will be where the floor area of the background stops. (You don't have to do that line). I will draw the background and edit it into the animation when I get back. It's easy.

Miccool
06-06-2009, 03:45 PM
nice man, A lot of improvement here. : ) keep it up.

Rabstar
06-07-2009, 07:08 AM
nice man, A lot of improvement here. : ) keep it up.

<3 yay!

Arch, amazing idea, I'll do it! <3

ShadeMe
06-07-2009, 07:16 AM
That's kewl!
btw why is there 15 character post rule?

fireman3521
06-07-2009, 10:44 AM
That's kewl!
btw why is there 15 character post rule?
to avoid spamming

I really like that style. too much sound though, the footstep were too loud.

Tidus
06-07-2009, 12:04 PM
o rly

power fuse0
06-07-2009, 02:23 PM
NAaaaaaaasty resizing at the end.
Alright though. Over use of the bubble thing though

Rabstar
06-08-2009, 06:33 AM
Lol, bubble thing :p
Thanks all, for the comments :D