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Sonoya
06-10-2009, 12:55 PM
http://www.truploader.com/view/552739
yh.. there was another but that one was because i was trying to prove my lag but heres my real offical one.. i hope its good

heres the lagg sample i was talking about
http://www.truploader.com/view/415728
to me.. this one seems better cause well to admitted the one on the top there i didnt really spend much time on... i got bored of it after i made the back ground

alcaknight
06-10-2009, 01:00 PM
Nice job. Wobbly in parts but that will go away with practice. It was kind of unexpected and looked weird when he waved his arms around in the beginning. It was out of place. The rocks that hit him didn't bounce right. They bounced twice and stopped. He didn't really move when the rocks hit him either. If rocks were being thrown at you, you would probably react to that. The fighting part was actually pretty good. Great job for you first.

Sonoya
06-10-2009, 01:03 PM
Nice job. Wobbly in parts but that will go away with practice. It was kind of unexpected and looked weird when he waved his arms around in the beginning. It was out of place. The rocks that hit him didn't bounce right. They bounced twice and stopped. He didn't really move when the rocks hit him either. If rocks were being thrown at you, you would probably react to that. The fighting part was actually pretty good. Great job for you first.
thank you for your criticism.
ill work hard to get better at the wobble and out of place parts.

doc
06-10-2009, 02:01 PM
Its pretty good for a first. It's really stiff though.

I<3LP
06-10-2009, 02:11 PM
i really liked the part where it was OVER! that animation sucked! im sooo mcuh better than you!

Sonoya
06-10-2009, 02:13 PM
i really liked the part where it was OVER! that animation sucked! im sooo mcuh better than you!
ok.. sure................

Sonoya
06-10-2009, 02:15 PM
Its pretty good for a first. It's really stiff though.
thanks i appreciate that