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Rabstar
06-10-2009, 10:29 PM
I persuaded pf0 to try line, so I gave him a combo, he said it wouldn't flow, but I proved him wrong! (I think!)

Non v-cam version with reactions:

http://www.truploader.com/view/196423

Non v-cam version without reactions:

http://www.truploader.com/view/748937

And since I am so stupid, I saved it without reactions, so no "V-cam version with reactions" =/
But oh well, my reactions were bad anyway.

V-cam version without reactions:

http://www.truploader.com/view/208358

My favorite is the non vcammed one without reactions, because:

The reactions were bad
With v-cam (which I rushed) it looks too fast =/

I see the swipe is hard to see, my bad on that part :s
But I'm learning!

And I took all your adviceseseses to add more frames :D

CC please!

-Hawk-
06-10-2009, 10:56 PM
You're making a progress a suppose. Good job.

Rabstar
06-10-2009, 10:57 PM
Thanks for the...Urmm...CC :P

Cronos
06-11-2009, 01:48 AM
i see you double framed the attacker after the uppercut, its abit jarring to the eyes because it suddenly stops (i think it would look better without it, also in my opinion you should put 1 more frame in between the first midair frame and the frame before it where he makes contact.

Still it looks pretty good >.<

Lixu
06-11-2009, 01:52 AM
More, God Damn, Anticipation.

Rabstar
06-11-2009, 03:27 AM
First you guys say "add more frames" now you say "more anticipation"... :'(
MAKE UP YOUR MINDS!

Clips
06-11-2009, 04:00 AM
It needs more anticipation which will then show more force, and some of the reactions could need work
still that doesnt really bother me

main thought - awesome

you are improving a lot, and the Super Ultra Flying Kick of Doom adds a nice touch =]

btw adding more frames can kinda end making 'more anticipation' lol.......
you might not get that but you will learn

Rabstar
06-11-2009, 04:26 AM
Yay!
I still don't get tht 'adding more frames can end making more anticipation'...
can you please go into detail or show me an example O.O

Clips
06-11-2009, 04:31 AM
Well I'm pretty sure adding more frames can end up making more anticipation if you put more frames in a certain place

I'm not 100Billion % sure
so we'll wait for an epic hero animator/someone who knows what they're talking about, to come and tell US if i'm right

Cuz I'm not completely sure....


I'm a failure :Nooooooo:

power fuse0
06-11-2009, 06:27 AM
There was no anticipation for the uppercut, none at all.
I didn't see a spin kick, the sweep was lazily done. The only thing i did like was the kick.
>:3

But you prooved me wrong, I'm terrible at fluidity though.
& yeah I guess i'll work on my one some time. I forgot what it was though o.o

Rabstar
06-11-2009, 06:40 AM
Hah, oh well! :D
Thanks for all the CC guys :D

RawGreen
06-11-2009, 10:19 AM
the upper cut needed anticipation. the height of the jump was nice, but the arm shouldn't snap down like that, you also need to have more fluidity to the pink man as he's spinning in the air, it's not natural. Also, the spin kick never even makes contact to the pink dudes head and he reacts horribly without even landing, he already is touching the ground.
the back of the pink man is too long and distorted, the floor sweep should look better than it does at this point. Because the foot pops out and never slides into or away from the destined location. Even though you used a trick make it seem like there's a decent flow at this point, there's not much for it to go on.
it would held if you picture the stick figure as 3-d on a 2-d plane.
You suffer slight resizing.
Pink guy gets shorter and black guy gets taller.
You have wobbliness.

You wanted C&C, I gave you a full look-over, I hope it's satisfactory.

Rabstar
06-11-2009, 10:24 AM
Raw, that was more than satisfactory. ^.^
You stated your points in a well layed out, easy to read format, also, you didn't make me feel like a noob or anything, which I liked. :D
I do not see the wobbliness part, bcause it is line!

s-t-y-x
06-11-2009, 10:31 AM
its fun to watch :D

RawGreen
06-11-2009, 10:34 AM
Raw, that was more than satisfactory. ^.^
You stated your points in a well layed out, easy to read format, also, you didn't make me feel like a noob or anything, which I liked. :D
I do not see the wobbliness part, bcause it is line!

they are subtle, they are there, just not much.

Rabstar
06-11-2009, 11:48 AM
Ohk, I didn't see o.o
lol. Thanks!

doc
06-11-2009, 12:29 PM
Pretty good, I didn't really like the reactions though, and there should be another frame or 2 when he's going up. And the blur was bad.