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NeCrOdE
03-28-2008, 10:11 PM
some parts look choppy and akward but i need specific points for improvement, stuff to help me move along faster while practicing.

http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/6159/newanimationif1.th.gif (http://img379.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newanimationif1.gif)

thx in advance.

(btw this is only scene1, not done yet)

EDIT:
second anim: http://img99.imageshack.us/my.php?image=beamzzzda5.gif
Third anim: http://img79.imageshack.us/my.php?image=combothinggifnz0.gif

reposted first anim (saved properly now)

armygeidon
03-28-2008, 10:16 PM
Cool for a first try. I don't want to really suggest anything manly because I don't see ALOT wrong. There is some stuff but it is good in either way.

1. Make them crouch before the jump. I saw in some instanses you didn't crouch them.

pivotfreak747
03-29-2008, 01:51 AM
it is really slow and choppy and the sticks are horrible also practice basic movements for instance know one jumps the way that clown did

sss
03-29-2008, 02:57 AM
slow uneased and stiff .

Jet
03-29-2008, 11:22 PM
You made all the sticks? the big 'un is really comical. not in a funny way, however.

mowmow924
03-30-2008, 01:15 PM
well, er, um, maybe speed it up plz.

btw jet no i diddnt copy u i just took the test and ended up like this

NeCrOdE
03-30-2008, 06:17 PM
thanks for the input guys. i didn't notice most of that stuff until you mentioned it and ill remember to work on it.

NeCrOdE
04-18-2008, 11:52 PM
http://img99.imageshack.us/my.php?image=beamzzzda5.gif
not much body mmovement in this one but tell me what you think. (i think i got better :Happy: )

btw except for the guy at ebggining stks are from droidz

SRC
04-19-2008, 12:02 AM
don't double post, it's called the edit button.
@ anim, like the concept but the movements were off, good job if u did make those stks. read some tuts, and just practice. Also you should look at good animators anims, like doomdooer or powerfuse or frodomoj. good luck!
@ second, holy improvement. way better than the first, still read tuts and look at the good pplz anims, the running and movements could still use some work. GOOD JOB ON BEAMS (i've never seen a newb pull off a beam that good...)

NeCrOdE
04-19-2008, 12:06 AM
don't double post, it's called the edit button.
@ anim, like the concept but the movements were off, good job if u did make those stks. read some tuts, and just practice. Also you should look at good animators anims, like doomdooer or powerfuse or frodomoj. good luck!
@ second, holy improvement. way better than the first, still read tuts and look at the good pplz anims, the running and movements could still use some work. GOOD JOB ON BEAMS (i've never seen a newb pull off a beam that good...)

srry. post was a few pages back so i decided to bump it rather than make a new topic.

and ty for the input =)

Jet
04-19-2008, 03:52 AM
Like your avvy. ITS TEH EDDY! i lieked the second anim

NeCrOdE
06-20-2008, 11:22 AM
actually made this several weeks ago but net was down...anyways another animation, i think im getting better but somehow my movements still dont look realistic.....

http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/9190/combothinggifnz0.gif (http://imageshack.us)
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/9190/combothinggifnz0.b40d0f2b07.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=79&i=combothinggifnz0.gif)

Stks from droidz: blast (second beam), electric beam (first beam), smoke, fades, hells' hammer.