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unwanted
06-15-2009, 01:26 AM
Newest:

RHG demo done
-http://www.truploader.com/view/547071

RHG demo (update) + mirror image (unfinished effects under construciton)
-http://www.truploader.com/view/355877

Rhg Demo(unfinished)
-http://www.truploader.com/view/184191

New
-http://www.truploader.com/view/403803

-http://www.truploader.com/view/498940

-http://www.truploader.com/view/935342

Olds
yesterday
-http://www.truploader.com/view/484544

Month ago
-http://www.truploader.com/view/621257

5 Months ago
-http://www.truploader.com/view/446029

just copy and paste links to your internet bar and im sure it'll show up

ratiug
06-15-2009, 01:54 AM
the particle one was wayyyy too stiff and they shouldn't be zapping back too quickly

the random one was... pretty good, just work on the trails, they're too thick

motion practice was too choppy and to be frank the stick was really ugly. It became thin all of a sudden. Work on the poses too because spinning like a ballerina is not cool. The vcam was shaking when he was stretching his limbs (not that you shouldn't do it but it just looks weird to me) Otherwise it was good. The first kick had a lot of force.

The run was not bad, just very cartoony and bouncy. Next time don't forget to add the upper body :3

the one 5 months ago didn't make much sense to me and was too short to comment on, but all i can say is try to make it less shaky and wobbly (unless you're doing a blob thing)

The RHG, well... one it's too short. Two there was too little force. Try removing a few frames in between (especially the extending arm bit) I don't know if it is your style but big headed baby sticks don't appeal to me much. The mirror image could have been a bit lighter, but it was alright (I luv mirrorz makes the floor look shiny :D) So ya it was pretty decent. Improved a lot i must say. keep it up!

Sonoya
06-15-2009, 08:47 PM
what kind of dramatic changes are these?
sry but did u even make some of these.. eh oh well

your rhg chacter has a big head but cool the "news" were really stiff
the olds and month ago are ... i jsut dont like but the 5 month ago looks pretty cool sry if i sounded mean there

Cobalt
06-16-2009, 01:26 PM
Keep workin on em

unwanted
06-16-2009, 01:51 PM
No prob ratuig I'll do my best

Sonoya yeah I made them all and I'll try to make the flow and easing of the animation better :D

Animation Fan I'll keep working on em

also update:

Rhg demo done
-http://www.truploader.com/view/547071

kixen2
06-16-2009, 08:16 PM
lol this might sound gay but ur RHG dude was actually kinda cute lol

1lasthero
06-16-2009, 09:02 PM
RHG demo done
http://www.truploader.com/view/547071

RHG demo (update) + mirror image (unfinished effects under construciton)
http://www.truploader.com/view/355877

Rhg Demo(unfinished)
http://www.truploader.com/view/184191

New
http://www.truploader.com/view/403803

http://www.truploader.com/view/498940

http://www.truploader.com/view/935342

Olds
yesterday
http://www.truploader.com/view/484544

Month ago
http://www.truploader.com/view/621257

5 Months ago
http://www.truploader.com/view/446029

Yeah i saw these animations on fluidanims
You must be the same guy.

Request
06-16-2009, 09:10 PM
I dont like effect video's.

Really easy to draw lines.

Rhg was pretty good, just very stiff.

unwanted
06-16-2009, 10:03 PM
Kixen2 lol at that thanks though

1lasthero yeah I am the same guy :P

Uni-bomber thanks I'll make better animations next time

3xtr3m3z
06-17-2009, 03:11 PM
Rhg demo done
-http://www.truploader.com/view/547071

this 1 was really good in my opinion but i really didnt like the others