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Dugh
06-15-2009, 01:33 PM
Hi!
I'm going to post some of my stick animations in this thread. Mainly to get constructive criticism, but also to see my progress sometime in the future (if you know what I mean).

Anyways, just going to start out with this animation that I whipped together in like 20 minutes or so.

LINK: http:// spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/150609/78603_Untitled-3 [DOT] php

Tell me what you think!
Still trying to get the physics down right. Going to update you guys soon.

Thanks!

Orange Blob
06-15-2009, 01:49 PM
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/150609/78603_Untitled-3.php
there you go.
Well it was pretty good.
Could be better.
please don't use the free transform tool cos it screws up the anim :/

ratiug
06-15-2009, 11:28 PM
woah orange blob got banned :3

as for your anim well... its got force, just a bit too stiff. liked the idea tho
add heads next time before posting :D

Cobalt
06-16-2009, 01:21 PM
it was ok 5 out of 10

Dugh
07-19-2009, 05:21 AM
Got another one for you.
http:// spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/190709/48661_test .php

(Remove the spaces)

Comments, please! :)

Thanks.

Shanto
07-19-2009, 06:15 AM
It was actually pretty alright, but you need much more force-it looks like your sticks are using any power. Do this by making a lot of slow frames at the beginning-and then suddenly a big space for impact. Kind of like the "Boom" if you will. I kind of explain that here:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C3BrFR_MXk0&feature=channel_page

You can see that there is a big space in between 2 frames at one point (it's at about 3:30)

Your sticks are also a bit stiff, try to make them bend more and stuff.

Second Anim:
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/190709/48661_test.php

Your stick seems to pause right after the punch, which disrupts the fluidity. The reactions seem a bit early-or not on impact...I don't really know.

The second one seems a lot better, apart from the pause after the first punch.