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rakeria
06-18-2009, 07:54 PM
Hey,I got flash bk(after som difficulities)
And made a combo,and i've gotten alot rusty :p

http://www.truploader.com/view/913972

C&C please ^^

Sonoya
06-19-2009, 08:37 AM
because no one else seems to want to say shit ill give u criticism.
i copyed your little stuttery thing on to mines XD just in different moves..
so im saying we both have this problem k?

rakeria
06-19-2009, 11:37 AM
because no one else seems to want to say shit ill give u criticism.
i copyed your little stuttery thing on to mines XD just in different moves..
so im saying we both have this problem k?



lol,they comment in diffrent times,it takes a day or two for a comment to come,I can wait :D stuttery? Whats stuttery lol?

doc
06-19-2009, 02:26 PM
ok I'll comment. For future reference, you should zoom in a bit so we can see what's going on better. It lacks easing and anticipation in some places, and the arm goes up a bit too far on the elbow. Although that may look better if its anticipated more.