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smiley099
03-29-2008, 02:05 PM
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/smiley/dbz1xn3a.gif

.Busted
03-29-2008, 02:31 PM
i liked the other one better that you posted but its still good, work on the smoke

Darc
03-29-2008, 03:30 PM
Some of the effects were good and some were bad. In other words, LEARN TO HATE SMOKE! lol just kidding, but the smoke was pretty bad, it needs to fade as it desinigrates and it doesn't desinigrate like that. The lightning was a nice touch, but could have been better. The ending was really nice, you definitely have the basic movements done, even though there weren't any real movements, but I doubt you could do this and not know how to walk, lol. I like the teleporting. I'd say you're really close to high beginner. Just make another longer animation, a bit smoother, this standard, you got high beginner. Also, don't use smoke at your skill level.

pivotfreak747
03-29-2008, 05:59 PM
you have to practice camera movements just a bit when he zoomed in threw the guy it looked off

smiley099
03-29-2008, 07:04 PM
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/smiley/part2_gifk2ec.gif i made it betah lolz

Darc
03-29-2008, 08:46 PM
Still pretty good, the bandana sucks though, that smoke was really good, but only on the part when the guy was sliding, THAT'S how you need to do it. If you were smoother, you would get High beginner for sure

dark_wolf
03-29-2008, 10:33 PM
I think some of those effects are pretty good.. But you really need to work on easing, But thats ok, Keep it up =D Med beginner

mowmow924
03-30-2008, 12:18 PM
it was btretty cool but im only a noob

MiniMan
03-30-2008, 02:02 PM
Nice zoom in on his ass.

.:Twisted Symphony:.
03-30-2008, 04:36 PM
Thats a pretty good work in progress but I would ditch special affects for a bit and work on basics a bit, other wise you will have on hell of a time getting to intermediate.