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FoShizzle
06-23-2009, 12:52 AM
http://filebox.me/view/baewgr2u8

http://filebox.me/files/baewgr2u8_HE IS FAST.gif

Cronos
06-23-2009, 01:33 AM
The person was done pretty well, better than most people here could hope to do, although the effects could use alot of work, they looked rushed and also his face when it does the close up.

FoShizzle
06-23-2009, 01:46 AM
It's his face. I don't want to make him anything too special because I wouldn't be able to animate like that. So his face is just like that.. Pretty simple eh?
Yeah, effects were rushed.. I suck at effects so much.

MaxZ
06-23-2009, 02:35 AM
Lol at his face. I guess you could make more frames for the steps and then double frame them.

the darkest white
06-23-2009, 03:59 AM
the effect right at the start was kinda ugly. And his hair was too . . . scribbly?

but on a good note you got the movements down nicely and it really gave a feeling of speed.

(lol at his face XD)

FoShizzle
06-24-2009, 03:01 AM
You guys need to understand, THE CHARACTER IS SUPPOSED TO LOOK LIKE THAT. Scribbled hair, weird-ass face, eh. Anywho, I suck at particles and I could never make something good with them.. I don't use them often.

the darkest white
06-24-2009, 03:50 AM
. . . ok. If it makes you feel any better I also fail at particles and can't even do FB?

towneshasnolife
06-24-2009, 12:33 PM
The face could use work.

FoShizzle
06-25-2009, 01:43 AM
/facepalm.

and Darkest, you could probably FB really good, I remember when you used to animate pretty much daily :P

the darkest white
06-25-2009, 02:08 AM
Yea . . . good times . . . I'm trying to start doing it daily again actually.

I think, however, I may hold off on the FB. At least not till I get my new lappy. (Yay lappy!)

N T
06-25-2009, 03:35 AM
Wow nice FB. It gives you a feeling of speed and action. I can tell you might be in an animation company one day if you practise the stuff that you're having some trouble with.

FoShizzle
06-25-2009, 05:05 AM
Lol.. I don't think so, those people in them animation companies are FAR better than I am. It'll take me a long time to be as good as them..

gloryroad211
06-25-2009, 08:21 AM
again ur animation is good but hard to follow. The 'looks hes fast' bit was a bit lazy though.

ace.
06-26-2009, 05:20 PM
uhh, not bad, but lol work on the faces