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eviltie
06-23-2009, 08:54 AM
OK, so many anims. o.o Here we go.
Major:
3/16/09 - Insanimation: http://jartemius.deviantart.com/art/Insanimation-117764316
This is probably my first big and serious flash project. I'm n00b. But I worked very hard on this one. I began doing this as a test but I decided to add a storyline and music. So this is the result.
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6/01/09 - Dont Give Up: http://jartemius.deviantart.com/art/Dont-Give-Up-124436181
This is my second submission here. It's a compilation of my tests. Well, about 2 years ago I've seen animations like XiaoXiao, Killing Spree, etc. and I wanted to animate. But my parents said I can't, becouse I have bad hands (cerebral palsy). So anyway I've started to animate...
Please enjoy.

Tests:
1/12/09 - http://portfolio.sticktacular.com/portalview.php?creation=433
1/13/09 - http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=461517
1/13/09 - http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=958887
1/13/09 - http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=475367
1/14/09 - http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=476477
1/14/09 - http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=246183
1/15/09 - http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=21800
1/18/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/970988
3/22/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/474641
5/14/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/169435
5/14/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/566348
6/07/09 - http://jartemius.deviantart.com/art/RHG-Demo-125127285
6/10/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/365199
6/12/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/916075
6/13/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/314549
6/13/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/282544


Pretty much, eh?

N T
06-23-2009, 09:11 AM
For the first one: Nice smooth moves, but physics were off. I see you were trying to do Jcamelos style. And you got the song from "I forgot the name of it" Terkoiz's animation right? I'll edit this post when I watch more of your anims.

For the second one: Very nice(I mean like verrry nice). Great improvement. Just work on the physics again.

undagada
06-23-2009, 09:16 AM
Cerebral palsy, huh? Pretty impressive. The tests are really short but there's a lot of them, so I guess it's ok.

The first "big submission" was, eh... The movements were OK, even though they lacked force and were slow. The main thing you can work on is direction, you left a lot of still frames, probably to sync it with the music, amirite? But when that empty screen came up, and the music was still playing, I thought the animation was over. That happened like 10 times until I got tired of the whole animation. You could very easily fix it and improve.

What I wouldn't recommend is using cerebral palsy as an excuse - that won't get you anywhere. No offense, but that's how the internet works.

alcaknight
06-23-2009, 09:17 AM
Those are really nice. The movements actually look real. The trampoline one was probably my favorite. On the bow and arrow one, I would give it more anticipation, or drawback of the arrow. It seemed.. too short.

Waterboy
06-23-2009, 09:24 AM
Wow, quite excellent I can tell you're no such beginner as i thought you were going to be. *Bows*

Rabstar
06-23-2009, 10:06 AM
I really like your stick style. Very good.
The animations are perrty stiff.

MaxZ
06-23-2009, 10:15 AM
The style is unoriginal, you can't just copy a style.

N T
06-23-2009, 10:18 AM
Yes you can, who says?

undagada
06-23-2009, 10:44 AM
By the way, N T, you disabled PMing on StickAnims.

N T
06-23-2009, 11:14 AM
By the way, N T, you disabled PMing on StickAnims.
Oh yeah, So only mods or admins can pm me. I'll change it.

eviltie
06-23-2009, 12:00 PM
OK, Thanks everybody for the coments. (:

MaxZ
06-23-2009, 12:02 PM
Yes you can, who says?

You know what I mean.

eviltie
06-23-2009, 12:05 PM
You know what I mean.
Do you mean Jc's style, huh?

MaxZ
06-23-2009, 12:08 PM
Indeed .

Orange Blob
06-23-2009, 12:11 PM
i just got my ass kicked by a kid with cerebral palsy O_O
shit, i suck

eviltie
06-23-2009, 12:13 PM
Indeed .
*Sigh*. Yeah OK - I'm trying to imitate him... but not copy complitely.

alcaknight
06-23-2009, 01:11 PM
You're free. Do whatever the hell you want. I personally like that style. And it can't just be one person's style.

undagada
06-23-2009, 04:19 PM
JC's style isn't even that original. The only style you can't copy:

-Cosmoseth

GO

Bonk
06-23-2009, 05:27 PM
I love the humour, definitly don't lose that. Most people get good at doing generic fights, but they always lacks proper jokes and any reason to actually watch.

Rabstar
06-23-2009, 10:13 PM
I love the humour, definitly don't lose that. Most people get good at doing generic fights, but they always lacks proper jokes and any reason to actually watch.


That is a very good thing. Almost anyone can animate, but not anyone can have good ideas. =D

I really like your stick style. Naow, your fighting can be improved, you need more anticipation.

Pm me please.

eviltie
06-24-2009, 02:23 AM
Aw, right then. Thanks again!
@Orange Blob: Practice, man. Practice!

Orange Blob
06-24-2009, 05:00 AM
I practice, and i still suck O_O
this makes me feel like killing myself :'(

doc
06-24-2009, 06:57 AM
The first one was really good, except it was kinda slow-paced and the attacks lacked force. The second one was better towards the end. Good job! Keep it up.

alcaknight
06-24-2009, 10:18 AM
I practice, and i still suck O_O
this makes me feel like killing myself :'(

You can do it, put a knife into it. :)

Not really, but whatever.

Orange Blob
06-24-2009, 10:33 AM
lol, stab my computer :P
Okay :D

eviltie
06-26-2009, 03:12 AM
Lololol. :3
Anyway, good luck.

feantiC_
06-27-2009, 08:49 PM
Youz You'r animations are grat a litle stiffy but great!