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Zainuba
06-26-2009, 11:08 AM
Since I can't draw sticks in flash for the life of me I'll just show some works I did that i would like some feedback to help me make em great not so-so. Hers four:
(repect goes to those who made the figures i just use em)
Very first one, forgot why i did this:
http://i681.photobucket.com/albums/vv171/Zainuba/StarttoFail.gif

since making the taller sticks run was annoying i started with the midgets:
http://i681.photobucket.com/albums/vv171/Zainuba/itsok.gif

And then a new dance came out call jerking i liked it so i tried this it... sucked:
http://i681.photobucket.com/albums/vv171/Zainuba/reject-jerkpart1.gif

I have plenty more but never changed them to post Ill add more but i want feedback on what could really be work on and improved.


credit to people at school who help and those who made the sticks i used

Avian
06-27-2009, 05:09 AM
Go to the beginners section because the animations were choppy, the physics were off, it was extremely stiff.

Also, check some tutorials.

And there was no need to write the credits so small.

Rival
06-27-2009, 05:13 AM
wow, avian, You SUGGEST???

Avian
06-27-2009, 05:15 AM
Hm, no. I'm gonna edit my post.

N T
06-27-2009, 05:34 AM
haha. that's funny. I SUGGEST you do what Avian SUGGESTED. Your animations were not teribble like others, but practice shall make them better.

Zainuba
06-27-2009, 12:00 PM
haha. that's funny. I SUGGEST you do what Avian SUGGESTED. Your animations were not teribble like others, but practice shall make them better.


Okay good they suck but not like most. well i have work to do give a week and ill get something hopefully better

Rival
06-27-2009, 12:02 PM
No, No you won't. Just post in the beginners section.