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armygeidon
03-29-2008, 11:45 PM
http://uploaded.pivothost.org/Armygeidon/test_jumpqljw.gif

Any suggestions? Please C&C and rate if you would lie but you don't have to.:heh:

ANM8
03-30-2008, 05:20 AM
Its quite stiff. good easing though, but there was only abit.

not bad....

-ANM8

*offtopic: FIRST POST!

pivotnoobguy
03-30-2008, 07:40 AM
looks like it has some good easing tho, but i think tha smoke when he jumps (or explosion) doesn't fit there, looks like he farted and flied away XD
when he lands, there should be more pressure over him, and his force should be still present, but decreasing.
You should move the ground when he lands :D
make the jump faster, and the falling even faster (well i don't mean 3 frames but...)
the rest is pretty good :D
7/10
needs changes

sss
03-30-2008, 10:36 AM
stiff .

Dax
03-30-2008, 10:59 AM
"7/10"
I don't think so sorry, the jump didn't look right, make a foot push him off the ground, the explosion was pretty bad too, landing was ok but the arms were stiff. I give it 4/10 and I say your low begginer.

John4
03-30-2008, 11:28 AM
Good try at effects, that'll probably come in handy later on. The explosion-thing as slightly late. It just didnt look right. And taht launch stance right before he jumped was a diagonal position. I thought i was awkward for him to jump fully upwards, not moving to the right direction at all.

NeCrOdE
03-30-2008, 05:13 PM
it looks good except for 2 things:
-the way the knee bends when hes launching looks kinda weird. (leg goes down as hes lifting off then snaps up suddenly.)
-also you can speed it up a bit and add a longer pause before the decent to make it look more realistic.

pivotfreak747
03-30-2008, 08:46 PM
ya when he flew up he went to slow and when he landed he should of bent his back more he moved to a regular styance way to quick

power fuse0
03-31-2008, 05:08 AM
*offtopic: FIRST POST!

why should be care?


Does the guy has jet packs on his shoes?

Sherbet
03-31-2008, 08:36 AM
try putting the smoke in, when he lands, it may look better, remoe it from when he takes off though :S

armygeidon
03-31-2008, 08:39 AM
try putting the smoke in, when he lands, it may look better, remoe it from when he takes off though :S

I don't know... the way I picture that it doesn't seem right.