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littled301
03-30-2008, 06:46 PM
people im 9 years old and this is my first ever flash:Smile:

http://www.swfup.com/file/172512

please rate and tell me what i need to work on :Smile:

Komaru
03-30-2008, 07:00 PM
Don't use fullbody, and don't use your age as a way to try to make us feel bad for you. For a starter, I would use the line tool, rather than what you did. Try to do more easing. Attacks need more force behind them. I use a V-cam for that.

Shanto
03-30-2008, 07:03 PM
Hey, Noob of Doom, learn what fullbody is.

It was kind of weird. I couldn't really tell what happened.

armygeidon
03-30-2008, 08:05 PM
Meh, though it was better then my first animation:

1. I couldn't really tell what was happening or wether they were attacking or poking eachother.
2. The bodies kept shifting in size like they were having twitches.

Work on it dude.

jadony
03-30-2008, 08:14 PM
it wasnt bad 4 ur age and bein ur 1st animation.but like shanto said... i could really tell what happend either

Index
03-30-2008, 08:32 PM
What the fuck you guys, age doesn't mean shit.

Ssjbryando
03-31-2008, 02:44 AM
What the fuck you guys, age doesn't mean shit.

Well. When someone is jounger, they might understand things worse. Like he probably doesn't know what easing is, and everything, because hes joung. I guess he can learn it, but AGE has a small factor of things. Yeah yeah apples is good to =\ But thats the only good 9 Year old. (10 now) And there are some here.

And fullbody isn't that, that is stick O_o Doom or something.

and yeah, add more frames in the animation and stuff.,

the afro ninja
03-31-2008, 03:08 AM
dont redraw the bodies every frame unless there is a lot of movement, erase and redraw what u need and move and rotate to fit accordingly.

lol that play button was fugly as shit too.