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croft70
07-16-2009, 03:30 PM
hello well, now i made an animation but i need help i will uploead to NG but i need a song, and CC and I don know what to put in the so... help, how i can improve the animation?

http://filebox.me/view/tgc1y7n5t

and i need a good song can you help me?

Flood
07-16-2009, 04:26 PM
Don't upload that on Newgrounds. That is all.

Waterboy
07-16-2009, 04:27 PM
Um CC
-Really quite stiff
-Effects were meh (I'm horrible so those looked decent to me)
-Work on walking

Song
-It's not really long enough to have a song I think
-But... Bonito by Jarabe de Palo, perfect :)

I also don't think it's long enough to be on NG anyways

Flood
07-16-2009, 04:33 PM
The effects are only filters. So basically he was being a filter whore.

Spazmodan
07-16-2009, 05:04 PM
I'm terrible at animating so, the only thing i'm going to comment on is the conversation they're having with each other. All the periods after the words got annoying and it was just...so..cheesy.

Also, at the finishing punch to the guy, his arm extended like the guy from Fantastic Four.

stick B pilli
07-17-2009, 12:20 PM
me gusto pero le falta mas fluidez cuando aterriza de un salto

croft70
07-18-2009, 10:53 AM
ehhh... thnaks but i uploaded to NG and add some things so... there it is

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/503818